Fanfic: Hands on Experience Chapter 8: Indecision Part 1

[nanirisfic]

Title: Hands on experience. Chapter 8: Indecision Part 1
Pairing: SeiferxZell
Rating: NC-17.
Warning: Nudity, threat of violence, actual violence aggressiveness and…sex, yes there’s also GRAPHIC sex in here. A LOT OF IT Didn’t think that you’d be surprised. You know, swearing should have been in the warning from day one. I have a potty mouth

Comments

[anonymous]

Here I thought I was dirty. Geez you're gonna make a prude out of me. If that was day zero, then I can't even comprehend what the future has in store for those two. Can you even go beyond hardcore these days? I love the insatiable lusty Zell and his agressive bottomness:D I must admit I've read your chapter three times just imagagining the akward and kinky positions the pair get up to. Shame on you for tainting my innocence :P

I'm starting to think that you might just in fact be a retired retro porn star. I wish I had you as my sex ed teacher.....would have made it a LOT more insightful.

[nanirisfic]

Uh, thanks? Is it bad that this part is slightly above vanilla to me? I guess it's all the cum play that really details too much. I don't know, that ":p" has me questioning your tone and 'retired retro' makes me feel old.

blah blah blah, it's all good. Glad you like. Zell has no shame with his love of hotdogs, why should he for the cock?

I've read a lot fiction by gay men for gay men. It's educational.

[shindoxxshuichi]

Oh. my gosh.

I'm with akare.

TOTALLY INCOHERENT. :(

so. SEXUAL.
so.. GOOD.
NEED. MOAR. :OOOOOOOOOOO

keep up the metaphor work. there were so many references.. "MONSTERS ON THE MOON." <-- LOL
ANYWAY. NEED. SHOW. NAO.

[nanirisfic]

Thanks for the feedback. Glad you liked.

It's in the works!

[perkyandproud]

Sorry it has taken me so long to post a review...it posted during my D&D game last week and I got distracted :-(

Oh....my. Between Zell's playing and his emotional rollercoaster...and then you add in hot sexing...and the bit about the moon (Seifer will eat those words, won't he?) Funny that Zell has always felt that way...perhaps something in his distant unremembered childhood?

Anyway...this chapter was just wonderful. How do you do it? :-) Ah, don't care, just keep doing it!! *grin*

[nanirisfic]

No worries. I thought since you saw half of it f-locked, you'd already said your bit. Thanks for writing a review anyway!

Well, distant unremembered childhood right now is Seifer bullying him, Selphie finding it funny, and the others indifferent or annoyed. I'm working around the basis that at his core Zell is the ever-loving, loyal great guy, but his childhood before Ma never got any closure.

AAAAAAAhhhh, there's the :-)'s again! Now accompanied by the verb within asterisks!

[perkyandproud]

I will verb again...*with* asterisks, if you don't update soon! Even a post to tell me what is going on with your life, how you are too busy or not inspired...

*sighs* Missing the lovely stories and fun-ness of chatting with you in reviews.

Watch out.... :-) !

[nanirisfic]

Sorry, sorry!

I've been writing, just posting in ff.net and not here. (Prototype and L4D) I have a bit of an avoidant personality, when I don't have anything to offer, so I shy away until I get something done.

I'm in a bit of a depression. My grandmother passed away the first of March after a long bout of Alzheimer's and being bedridden. It was her time and she simply slipped away drowsily, so I'm not distraught over it. Just...hollow hearted? You know that feeling of grief that's slow and thumping rather than jagged screams.

[jarredgoddess]

I read the first two chapters of this story way back in the day--when you first posted them--and I lost track of it after that. I just found it again the other day and was terribly excited to see there was quite a bit more. I can't wait to see where you take it from here.