Life without Katie; Naomi/Emily, Katie (first attempt)

[naomilyislove]

My first attempt at fanfic. I know it's not great, but comments (inc. constructive criticsm) would be appreciated :) This could be the beginning of something; will probably continue it at some point but would like some feedback before I do!...thanks in advance :)

"Jesus, Ems, what the fuck?" Naomi approaches her in her usual blunt manner, but there'

Comments

[fandango41]

Great start :D It will be interesting to see how Emily copes with being pulled in two directions now, wanting to just be with Naomi but needing to be there for her sister- in a nutshell, lots of potential. Keep writing!

[naomilyislove]

Thanks!! :)

[naomilyislove]

Thankyouu! I think I will do :)

[naomilyislove]

Sorry for delayed reply - thanks! :) That'd be really helpful. I haven't got round to writing a second part yet because been busy with school and stuff but it's half term now so hopefully soon will do :)

[the_sisko2375]

MOAR!!!! We wants moar awesomeness. =D

[naomilyislove]

Haha, thankyouu! :) I'm in the process of writing a second part - should be up in the next few days. Thanks again, glad you liked it :P xx