Lubido Comburo Chapter 5

Feb 13, 2012 17:59

Title: Lubido Comburo
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Ron/Hermione
Chapter: 5

Chapter: 5 )

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shygryf February 14 2012, 04:34:09 UTC
good lord that was amazing.

i am just so jealous that not only can you art, you can write too.

ridiculously hot and you even put in boots.

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napchic February 14 2012, 13:03:07 UTC
The boots are, as ever, dedicated to you :D

Fic is terrifying and entirely too complicated. I don't see how anyone writes it, lol.
Also, I only have about one mediocre fic!bunny every two years :)

But thank you so much. That's so sweet of you to read the whole, long thing, and leave a lovely review :)

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shygryf February 14 2012, 16:42:07 UTC
I was hoping the boots were dedicated to me but i didn't want to presume *hugs*

well those of us who have no drawing talent whatsoever have to get our ideas out somehow. as someone who now needs to make art instead of fic for april fools, i can tell you that ficcing is so much easier.

and as an aside, this morning i spilled a bit of hot oil on myself so i am pretending that the red dots are hearts and that ron is coming to kiss them better

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napchic February 14 2012, 17:19:44 UTC
That April fools fest! I've seen some of the best stuff from that fest. You will do something wonderful :)

And hot oil, and not the good, massagey kind...poor girl. Bless your heart. *Hugs you carefully*

Yes, Ron should absolutely come by to fix that.
*shoves Ron from this fic in your direction*
*reminds him to wear boots*

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writerwannabe February 15 2012, 16:46:11 UTC
Dear Lord...I should not have read that at work. *looks over shoulder for hidden cameras*

That was beyond words. *bows down to your amazingness*

Out of the whole story the one line that kills me every time is:
"You have a rapidly spreading rash of tiny fucking hearts?!"

*giggle!snort*

your writing puts mine to shame. Arts AND Writes....all hail the chic who naps :)

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napchic February 15 2012, 16:58:30 UTC
I do love a nap :)

And sorry about the looking for hidden cameras, lol. It is a teensy bit NSFW, lol.
A bit.

I had to make the rash out of hearts. I have no really good reason why other than it amused me.

AND PFFFFt.
You lot are the writers in the family. I get one flacid little fic!bunny every 24-36 months. :) I am glad you enjoyed it though :D That happies me.

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napchic August 15 2012, 19:09:50 UTC
I think the first time I read this I turned bright red and closed the window ( ... )

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dskfjsdlkjfsdlkfjasdlk;!! callieskye May 25 2017, 23:57:31 UTC
*babbling non-sensical sounds...* where do I even begin with this?? backwards perhaps?

the ending... obviously I need to develop a better concept of fic length via word count because I was all kinds of distressed when this one ended. I was hoping 16k was a lot longer. Silently optimistic that the hearts would keep returning and they would have to continue treatment long enough for the two dorks to finally admit their feelings to each other!

Your properly rough around the edges constantly swearing, incredibly awkward Ron.... *dies* perfection. So many brilliant lines!

A few of my fave have to be..

"There's loads of things I haven't done before... until yesterday."
"Yes, Hermione, I'm well aware, now please, I have tiny hearts to grope, so sod off."
"You have a rapidly spreading rash of tiny fucking hearts?!"

The only thing I disliked about this fic was that it had to end. *pout*

Kudos to TMBlue for telling me I needed to read this one.

*goes back to search the links in vain hopes that there are more chapters hiding somewhere*

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RE: dskfjsdlkjfsdlkfjasdlk;!! napchic March 21 2018, 13:22:08 UTC
I meant to tell you this... checks your comment date... about a bloody millions years ago, but you are a fucking delight ( ... )

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Re: dskfjsdlkjfsdlkfjasdlk;!! callieskye August 16 2018, 03:17:40 UTC
Okay so this is definitely not just the "2nd" time I've read this brilliance... but since I spent all day popping in and out to make it last longer I felt I should throw some grateful flailing your way again. It's been a highly unproductive day that started with a re-read of Iron & Blood and culminated with TINY FUCKING HEARTS... because really is there a better way to waste a day? (Actually there is.. I could go read Worth It and that Time Travel deal that leaves me weak at the knees as well!) but really- just wanted to say thank you for the awesomeness. <3 <3 <3

sincerely,
Still Impressed.

ps. I might have been throwing lines at Blue all day.. so you're likely to hear from her lol

pps. erm.. I might have forgotten to actually log in.. you might get this twice.. or thrice because then I forgot my password and hit the button again...

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