i didn't find it awful at all, in fact, i really enjoyed it. sunny and sungmin are one of my top pairings, and .. wow, this was just really great for me.
That wasn't awful at all! It was brilliant and it's my fault for being dense that I didn't realize what had happened until it jumped out and slapped me in the face lol. What a beautiful story. :)
Okay, maybe it's awful in that Sungmin is terribly depressed and is hallucinating and all of that, but the writing is absolutely beautiful. I wish I could do that.
This is so wonderfully composed, almost like a poem. Every word has its place and resonance and meaning, so beautifully understated. It fits the mood perfectly and I really like the distanced, almost cold, style.
And I love how at the end, even without any big gestures, Sungmin seems to start to live again. <3
But I'm glad you liked it. I did spend quite a bit of time on the flow because since it's such a kind of...sad story I wanted the style to be more stilted. And I didn't want to leave the story on a sad note ouo
Lol, sounds exactly like the way I feel about my latest ff-baby. xD Sometimes you just can't explain why you're having hard feelings about your own fanfic, I guess.
You better write something happy and festive and Kyuhae for Christmas, though, lol!
Never mind my brainless demands, it's the combination of my inner Kyuhae and Christmas fangirls speaking.
fucking hell omg why don't you like this, this is bloody beautiful. legit have such a sadface on rn like donghae's face in bonomanic's icon (lol i'm looking at it rn and mirroring his expression). i would have liked more kyuhyun/sungmin interaction, tbh, but this is actually gorgeous in its own right, idk it feels so... plainly heartbreaking. it's like telling a story in quiet, quiet silence and you can hear nothing but the story and the emotions asldkfjaskdf you have this almost poetic way with words, ide.
i like writing proper comments for goodfic (okay i actually only write comments for goodfic, i'm just elitist like that), and yours really made me sadface (i usually have my poker face when i'm on my laptop) so ofc, bb ♥
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Okay, maybe it's awful in that Sungmin is terribly depressed and is hallucinating and all of that, but the writing is absolutely beautiful. I wish I could do that.
This is so wonderfully composed, almost like a poem. Every word has its place and resonance and meaning, so beautifully understated. It fits the mood perfectly and I really like the distanced, almost cold, style.
And I love how at the end, even without any big gestures, Sungmin seems to start to live again. <3
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But I'm glad you liked it. I did spend quite a bit of time on the flow because since it's such a kind of...sad story I wanted the style to be more stilted. And I didn't want to leave the story on a sad note ouo
Thanks for reading, as always <3
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You better write something happy and festive and Kyuhae for Christmas, though, lol!
Never mind my brainless demands, it's the combination of my inner Kyuhae and Christmas fangirls speaking.
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