Comments | naransaram: Slow Motion

naransaram

Slow Motion

Feb 07, 2011 12:59

» Slow Motion. Eunhae, Donghae-centric. Angst. 963 words.
Eunhyuk likes the world as fast as he can get it to be, but Donghae would rather take their journey one step at a time.

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sj! eunhae, fanfiction: super junior

Comments 26

drawingintheair February 8 2011, 23:26:23 UTC

I like the mood in this. I can't really put my finger on it, but I love how you fit it all in less than a thousand words. I like how it's Hyukjae the one who's going too fast and Donghae the one who wants to slow down because he wants it to last. That hesitance because they were friends and that it's better to take it slow. Despite Donghae being a tad harsh, or blunt (which is kind of how I see him to be, straightforward and not beating around the bush)he did it because he knew it'd be best and when at the end he says he wants it to work ♥. Long, slightly rambly comment, but I really liked this.

naransaram February 8 2011, 23:36:42 UTC

Thank you for reading!

tees2mai February 9 2011, 00:00:22 UTC

I was just wondering what to how to say i loved this when i read your comment and realized you almost always think along the same lines as me...

I agree with everything drawingintheair said and unf that smile on Hae's face :|

drawingintheair February 9 2011, 00:58:16 UTC

LOL yet despite this brain link, we're never online at the same time :|

smile on hae's face makes this my fave icon rn (and unfff hyukjae in yours)

gunhaeree February 8 2011, 23:43:44 UTC

Aghhh and I thought Hae will break up with Hyuk *sigh in relief*
Thank u for sharing ^^

naransaram February 8 2011, 23:53:06 UTC

Thank you for reading!

kuma_ri February 9 2011, 00:39:23 UTC

i thought they are going to split.
happy that they are not..
taking thing slowly is good..
LOVE

naransaram February 9 2011, 01:50:14 UTC

Thank you for reading!

seven10ninty February 9 2011, 00:53:26 UTC

This is sweeeet n lovely..
I can understand hae feeling,,fast relationship tends to ends fast too.. great that hyuk understand.. i hope there will be a sequel on this ^^
Ok,im asking too much -_-"
But,,love this!!
*huggles

naransaram February 9 2011, 01:50:27 UTC

Thanks for reading~ :D

marie_gable February 9 2011, 01:42:19 UTC

This is so beautiful!
Something about the way you wrote it made it feel so real, deep.
~I actually really like Donghae in this story. He really cares about his relationship with Hyukkie to take the time to make it work.
Thanks for sharing^^

naransaram February 9 2011, 01:50:38 UTC

Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it ^^