updateeee

[narcolepsyfic]

Hey guys. I updated LWY and Fallen. Hope you guys enjoy.

I sometimes wonder if anyone is still out there on this thing....

Hellooooo (echo......)

I'm weird.

Comments

[anonymous]

I'm out there! Ha ha but you know that already.

[narcolepsyfic]

No I don't. You're anonymous! lol

[nyydesignsync]

stupid LJ signed me out
now I'm back in

[narcolepsyfic]

Oh...just you.....

JK!! YAY! thanks Kim ::hugs::

[nikoleoncld9]

I'm still here...can I just say how much I love LYW. I do. And is it wrong for me to say that I am highly attracted to Trace in the story? It's weird, he's so short and cocky...totally not my thing, but it really does work for him in this story.

[narcolepsyfic]

YAY! I don't know. I don't think you are the only one in that boat. A lot of people are telling me they are realllllly enjoying the Trace/Courtney story line.

[nyydesignsync]

strangly I am enjoying the story of the little midget LOL as well. who would have thought but I do like it

[anonymous]

i really love LYW, and the story line between trace/courtney is amazing.....

but please don't take this the wrong way and hopefully as constructive criticism, but i dunno... fallen's kinda dragging.... it's a little boring and the whole darcy deal is getting annoying.

i still really love LYW though!! .... don't hate me, please.

[narcolepsyfic]

lol I wouldn't hate you. I actually agree to an extent. I have an end goal for fallen but I'm having a hard time getting there becuase I want to spend ample time on the differnet sections of the story. If you could explain what Daryc's "deal" is that is so annoying that might help me out. I'm trying to portray her as someone who is in love but extremely confused and starting to doubt every foundation her relationship was built upon. I personally (and arrogantly) think that last chapter I wrote was one of the better ones I've written lately for that story, but perhaps not. I guess in a sense it's difficult to read because this isn't a fun time for Darcy and Justin, they're breaking up. But I didn't want it to be something where bam it just happened. After I finish the story I will definately re-read and think about how I could have done it differently to perhaps make it a little less boring. Suggestions are always helpfull as well! If you have an idea of how it could be portrayed better or how Darcy should be reacting I'd

[anonymous]

ohkay, so i can understand where she's coming from about the dreams and it kind of creeping her out and everything, right? but you would think, that if you really loved someone, then you do what you can to get past it. and like, as i recall, she believed that he lied to her by not telling about his dreams and i guess in a way doesn't trust him blah blah blah because she doesn't know if he's thinking about his dream girl, but by her doing this, she doesn't really trust in their relationship enough to believe him when he said that it was her who he loves and not dream darcy. i guess you're right about not rushing the breakup... so maybe when you get that over with it'll get better... or less "boring" for me at least

[narcolepsyfic]

That helps a lot more. Thanks. And I don't mean for Justin to be a sissy at ALL in Look Your Way so whatever I'm doing wrong in that one I hope I can fix. Justin's very emotionally unstable in Fallen, so therefore I guess he can be seen as a sissy. Plus, most of the men I know, strong and masculine as they are, aren't always in control of their feelings. As far as Darcy, and hopefully this will come out more in the next chapters, the dreams were really a catalyst for their relationship to fall a part. It's not that neither of them are trying, maybe they're both trying to hard. But they can't seem to shake their thoughts and their doubts. It doesn't mean they don't love each other. Anyway, I hope most of this will be resolved in the next few chapters. I really am sorry you are finding it boring. Thanks again.