真っ赤な糸 (Makka na Ito/Deep Red Thread) - One Shot

[narcoticblue]

Title: 真っ赤な糸(Makka na ito/Deep Red Thread)
Author: narcoticblue
Rating: None (G)
Genre: Angst, musings, fluff
Warnings: None
Pairing(s): Saga x Tora
Disclaimer: I don’t own the characters.
Summary: I can feel myself disappearing.
Note: For aliceinfiction week 15 prompt: Empty Orchestra. Beta’d by

Comments

[seed_inyou]

!!! This was sooooooo so amazing...like I can't even make coherent words to describe it..so beautiful and emotional..and touching <3 WOW...just...wow <33

[narcoticblue]

Thank you! ♥ I'm glad you like it. X")

[maunetjeret]

Beatiful. This felt like Tora to me.
It was so sad...
I hate to see them separated. *Pouts*

[narcoticblue]

Thank you for reading :)

I thought it had a sense of Saga; it is something that can be felt both ways though.

Ah, me neither! But I have this thing for angst and the song is about separation so it inevitably turned out like this. T^T

Again, thank you very much!

[sono_kiseki]

I HATE YOU FOR POSTING THIS WHEN I'M STILL IN JAPAN AND NOT IN A PLACE WHERE I CAN SLOWLY HOLE UP IN MY CUSHIONY CHAIR AND READ THIS ;____;

THIS SPOT IS MINE. 8D

I'm coming back to read after I touch down around monday/tuesday~ poke me if I forget. /is shot/

[narcoticblue]

NOOOO I'M SORRY :((

Haha, take any spots you want. XD

[sono_kiseki]

I fail, I so totally forgot I took a spot.

/hides/

[fae_dreamdance]

Hi! :)

The way that you write is very, very intense. The vivid imagery is quite beautiful; I am huge fan of that. I really enjoyed the detail of the ribbon and how it symbolized them as and their unraveling relationship--thats really well done. :)

Shou and Hiroto, I think, are much too high energy for something like this. :D So good choice with Tora and Saga--I think it fits them perfectly. I like the fact that you're not entirely sure which perspective this is from and its sort of on the reader to decide. I think its Saga actually but thats my opinion. :D

Thank you for posting this, it was a very, very nice story. :D I enjoyed it. Keep up the good work--well. When you're not getting ready for tests. :D Good luck on those too.

-J

[narcoticblue]

Thank you! :D

The red thread was more or less taken directly from aforementioned song - which itself is about separation.

I'd say it's Saga too. He gives off that lonely, fragile presence. XD I suppose it could be interpreted as Tora, in a sense, that's why I left it open.

Thank you for the awesome comment. ♥

[narcoticblue]

*sings along with you* sayonara~ aa~ ♪

Thank you for reading. :D