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[narkkasu]

                Getting bored of decimating the alliance to the increasingly loud sounds coming from next door, he logged off his Paladin. Slipping on his shirt and some sandals, he laughed as things started falling off his desk. His neighbors were something else.

Stumbling uncoordinatedly down the stairs he made it to the street,

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[grimmsical]

Nerd porn! YES, SO MUCH YES! Although I do have to say, it does rain in Socal. Just not that much. xD;

a typo that really stood out:

Raijier: Do you know Archars RL name?
Lestrad: Is it Jay too or something
Raijier: Its Milton. <-- shouldn't that be Martin?

Other than that, awesome.

[narkkasu]

^.^ im glad u liked

Thanks for pointing that out. I wrote this by hand first and i swear everytime i tried to write his name i put milton xDD

And the two times it drizzles here a year cant really count as rain >.> :p

[charisstoma]

NEVER played this. No reference points but LOVED this. So many places where it was snicker inducing. The romance happening in the background/foreground/anyground was sweet.
Having the other characters break the idenity news..priceless.

[mee_eep]

I loved this, you could work out that the cyber&r/l thems were the same but they were so cute and clueless.

Only ever made one attempt at CoD thats beeping hard, I wandered around aimlessly shot all the wrong people and died rather pitifully. Rrepeatedly. I'm no gamer lol

The banter with Jack was funny too, when are we going to get his story? *hopeful look* *puppy-eyes*

[rain_lass]

Haha, aw, I absolutely loved this! You're a great writer =) I love all the characters, they're so realistic. And nerdy, gotta love nerdy :D

[skylark97]

*dies giggling* My hubby used to play WoW endlessly with his friends from college and he still games with them from time to time...and I'm now going to imagine that he's Jack every time he's sitting at his computer talking to himself into his headphones. XD

Martin and Jay were sooooo cute!! And I totally love the dialogue between them all and that Jack plays cupid.

<333333 So awesomely nerdy! I LOVE it!