Comments | narknon: Antique Locket, Chapter 1

narknon

Antique Locket, Chapter 1

Jan 22, 2010 18:08

Jim fell for Nyota at first sight. If he was honest with himself, he fell in lust with Nyota at first sight. Love had come later and truth be told, it had been completely unexpected. The kiss on the transporter pad between Spock and Nyota had been a hit to the chest. One he’d been completely unprepared for, and something he’d tried not to think ( Read more... )

winona/george, star trek, kirk_uhura story prompt table, kirk/uhura

Comments 9

noobianrose January 23 2010, 07:33:49 UTC

Aw that was sweet! And a lovely interpretation of the prompt! I'm really really glad someone picked this one. It was one of my favorites when it was first submitted to the k/u comm about a year ago. :) you've done a wonderful, romantic, and sentimental job here!

narknon January 24 2010, 00:11:06 UTC

Thank you! This prompt seriously just called to me. I am very glad you like what I've done with it so far :)

alittle2happy January 23 2010, 16:34:58 UTC

:) Just do it kirk! geez!

narknon January 24 2010, 00:12:35 UTC

Our boy Kirk's gonna get some cajones, I promise. It's not on the K/U comm for nothing ;)

luvntrek January 23 2010, 19:28:56 UTC

This is sweet. I look forward to the next chapter.

narknon January 24 2010, 00:12:49 UTC

Thank you!

luckytohaveher January 23 2010, 22:34:46 UTC

Aw that was beautiful. I love how you wrote Winona here and Jim was spot on.

Just saw this is only chapter one *removes foot out of mouth* I can't wait to see where you take it next.

narknon January 24 2010, 00:20:46 UTC

Thank you! I just couldn't use Winona as a scapegoat for Jim, you know? And I guess I just prefer a mother-son dynamic like I'm trying to project here.

luckytohaveher January 24 2010, 02:02:41 UTC

I liked that a lot. It was disappointing to hear that Winona had not been such a good mother in the ST DVD. Their dynamics in this story were very believable.