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May 09, 2006 21:29

Title: Lavender
Author: Sentimental Star
Disclaimer: I own nothing in this marvelous universe; it all belongs to C.S. Lewis.
Claim: Peter/Edmund
Prompt: #079: Sickness (Set 100.1)
Word Count: 3,717
Rating: PG-15
Warnings: Incest, Slash, Kissing, Angst; it’s another long one
Summary: She often fears the two boys will kill themselves over this…

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peter/edmund 100.1 (sentimentalstar)

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xsay_goodnight May 11 2006, 11:04:53 UTC

"Edmund is tender as he swathes the washcloth around his hand and cools his brother’s burning face and neck. So tender that Lucy, who has snuck back to the boys’ room and been watching them for the past few minutes, feels tears prickle in her eyes. She slips away again without Edmund’s knowledge of her ever having been there in the first place."

I loved that. It made me think "Awwh!"

aelinwen May 11 2006, 15:02:04 UTC

::smiles:: So glad you approve. I meant it to show just how very deeply Edmund cares about Peter, and how very deeply Lucy cares about her brothers. If it made you think "Awwh!" then it was a success.

Thank you!

ever_on July 2 2006, 23:49:57 UTC

I loved this piece. I loved Edmund… and I loved Lucy. I adored Lucy. Because as I was reading it, I felt rather put out about the situation poor Edmund was in, and Lucy, as she is inclined to do, gave me hope for a sweet ending. And that is what came to pass. So sweet and loving…

I also wanted to let you know that I used one of your prompts from Brothers Born. I would have posted as much there, but it turns out that the prompt sparked my first Narnia slash fic, and thus it wouldn’t have been appropriate for the community. Just wanted to say thanks for the inspiration :D

~ AntipodeanOpaleye (though that would be too long for livejournal, and I am thus ever_on)

ever_on July 10 2006, 21:04:50 UTC

HIII!

It's great to hear from you! I'm quite glad I prompted your slash muse, and you're very welcome for the inspiration. I'm also pleased you liked my story so much! I've had such a mess (in a good way mostly) these past three or four weeks, so I haven't been on much, but again, I'm always happy to hear from you ^_^!

Best Regards,
Sentimental Star