Re: Fem!KakaGai
anonymous
July 3 2014, 14:26:13 UTC
Sorry, I noticed after I posted that i wasn't clear enough, but i couldn't edit. I meant that Kakashi is turned into a kunoichi. I was hoping for something lemony ^_^
Re: Fem!KakaGai
anonymous
July 3 2014, 10:16:24 UTC
...Idek, okay?
::~::~::~::
"KAKASHI!" A green blur zooms towards Team Seven and the fence they're painting. A green blur that slows and becomes a man sporting a bowl cut, spandex, and very, very, shiny teeth. "WILL YOU GO ON A DATE WITH ME?" He goes down on one knee, brandishing a bouquet of roses.
The genin (futilely) attempt to reboot their brains.
Kakashi's single eye remains glued to the pages of her book, ignoring the green eyesore posturing in front of her.
"No." She drawls. Page turn.
"BUT-"
"No."
The spandex-monster doesn't seem deterred. "AH, SO HIP AND COOL, MY ETERNAL LOVE!BUT I SHALL PERSEVERE! ONE DAY MY YOUTHFULLNESS WILL MELT THE ICE AROUND YOUR HEART! IF I DO NOT SUCCEED BEFORE NEXT YEAR, I WILL RUN A HUNDRED TIMES UP AND DOWN THE HOKAGE MOUNTAIN! YOSH!"
Sasuke discreetly covers his ears. Naruto has yet to pick up his jaw from the ground. Sakura whimpers at the thought of the two having children. Children.
NaruSaku, NaruSakuSasu
anonymous
July 2 2014, 14:15:09 UTC
Sakura and Naruto get together, but Sasuke's jealous...of both. The three of them have gone through so much - how will they get through this? (Resolve the NaruSakuSasu however you like...but if your inclination happens to be OT3, well ^^)
Round and Round We Go (1a/?)
anonymous
July 19 2014, 09:51:21 UTC
Be warned: I'm not overly concerned over canon compliance- don't know much about recent events anyway. Also, not revised.
-- [a prelude:]
The first time around, you're brothers.
No, that's not quite right. You're always brothers, fighting-laughing-loving-hating, inexorably drawn to each other, trapped in your orbits around each other by bonds you can't seem to break no matter how hard you try.
(and you do try, over and over again- but that's later.)
But the first time, you're brothers by blood, children of the Sage of the Six Paths.
--
[a minor detail:]
The first and perhaps only time that Asura is well and truly afraid of his brother: when he looks up from his father’s corpse, half-blinded by tears, and sees Indra’s expression, the darkness lurking behind. The sheer rage that he instinctively knows will become hatred.
(he tries to steer his brother away from that hatred. tries, and fails.)
(the only paths indra walks are the ones leading to power- the ones that also lead to madness and misery
( ... )
Ooh, this is good. I think 2nd person was an excellent choice here because of the identity question: the use of 'you' makes it clear this is the story of these souls in more than one life, whereas using names would separate the stories into "Indra & Ashura" and "Naruto & Sasuke" rather than it being a continuous cycle about these people who are always the same even when they're not.
(I'm not sure that made any sense, but I know what I meant. XD)
I also really liked this line: '(a brief, fleeting thought quickly crushed like a moth: he looks wrong broken like that.)'
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::~::~::~::
"KAKASHI!" A green blur zooms towards Team Seven and the fence they're painting. A green blur that slows and becomes a man sporting a bowl cut, spandex, and very, very, shiny teeth. "WILL YOU GO ON A DATE WITH ME?" He goes down on one knee, brandishing a bouquet of roses.
The genin (futilely) attempt to reboot their brains.
Kakashi's single eye remains glued to the pages of her book, ignoring the green eyesore posturing in front of her.
"No." She drawls. Page turn.
"BUT-"
"No."
The spandex-monster doesn't seem deterred. "AH, SO HIP AND COOL, MY ETERNAL LOVE!BUT I SHALL PERSEVERE! ONE DAY MY YOUTHFULLNESS WILL MELT THE ICE AROUND YOUR HEART! IF I DO NOT SUCCEED BEFORE NEXT YEAR, I WILL RUN A HUNDRED TIMES UP AND DOWN THE HOKAGE MOUNTAIN! YOSH!"
Sasuke discreetly covers his ears. Naruto has yet to pick up his jaw from the ground. Sakura whimpers at the thought of the two having children. Children.
The fence drips.
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I want to see Hashirama enjoy Madara's severed lower half despite the fact (or perhaps because) the upper half doesn't exist anymore.
Come on, I can't be the only Anon thinking that when reading the latest chapter, can I?
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Be warned: I'm not overly concerned over canon compliance- don't know much about recent events anyway. Also, not revised.
--
[a prelude:]
The first time around, you're brothers.
No, that's not quite right. You're always brothers, fighting-laughing-loving-hating, inexorably drawn to each other, trapped in your orbits around each other by bonds you can't seem to break no matter how hard you try.
(and you do try, over and over again- but that's later.)
But the first time, you're brothers by blood, children of the Sage of the Six Paths.
--
[a minor detail:]
The first and perhaps only time that Asura is well and truly afraid of his brother: when he looks up from his father’s corpse, half-blinded by tears, and sees Indra’s expression, the darkness lurking behind. The sheer rage that he instinctively knows will become hatred.
(he tries to steer his brother away from that hatred. tries, and fails.)
(the only paths indra walks are the ones leading to power- the ones that also lead to madness and misery ( ... )
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(I'm not sure that made any sense, but I know what I meant. XD)
I also really liked this line: '(a brief, fleeting thought quickly crushed like a moth: he looks wrong broken like that.)'
ETA: Forgot to anon. Oh well.
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Although... them italics... *palms face* Oh well.
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