[Fanfiction] Hunting

[annwyd]

Title: Hunting
Genre: Mostly action, hint of romance
Pairing: Ino/Sakura, hint of Tsunade/Shizune
Rating: PG for violence and a bit of innuendo.
Wordcount: 2,080
Prompt: From demoerin:
Requested pairings: Ino x Sakura, Tsunade x Shizune, Ino x Temari

Comments

[des_butterfly]

Simply gorgeous. I love the emotions in this, and how Inner Sakura got to come out to play for once. ^^

[snarkylightning]

I like how you wrote the interaction between Ino and Sakura. You dealt with canon extremely well and all the dialogue captured their voices nicely. The ending was very sweet, especially with Ton-Ton coming back. :)

It's not flattery when it's true.

[demoerin]

When I saw that it was my request you'd done I thought "jackpot!" You're one of my favourite Naruto authors.

That was a great twist with Ino and Inner Sakura. Also great is the fact that there's a broken cage around Inner Sakura, because that's exactly what I feel has changed with the "new" Sakura.

"But you're right. Hell yeah I'm free! Naruto and Sasuke helped--" She paused, looking annoyed, and then added, "So did you. But I did it myself." Mmmmmm. There are many lines like this one that capture these two and the way they work together, and I'm savouring them. The best is totally Ino's awakening line.

The entire ending is right for this piece, and wonderfully warm and sweet. And I'm amused by the way Ton-ton finds lesbianism familiar and comforting. XD

Thank you!

Re: It's not flattery when it's true.

[annwyd]

I'm glad that you like my work! And I'm especially pleased that you enjoyed this fic. I found it a pleasure to write--especially the bits about Inner Sakura and her newfound freedom. You're very welcome. :)