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Jun 28, 2010 11:28


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faorism June 28 2010, 19:34:20 UTC
Sakura/Karin. just another day.

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faorism June 28 2010, 21:03:40 UTC
/DIES DIES DIES. OMG TACKY NAIL POLISH. BEST. THING. EVER. (Except when you have it on.)

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ckret2 June 28 2010, 23:30:57 UTC
D'awww. So adorable. ♥ Tacky fingernail paint and all.

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gonrie June 28 2010, 19:43:31 UTC
Shikamaru/Ino. Doing laundry.

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or maybe he just doesn't remember the color of her panties. ezyls_girl June 28 2010, 22:10:58 UTC
black lace, victoria's secret, no-stretch, the backing thin enough to ride up like a thong. like he could wear anything like this. which idiot sorted the laundry at the dry cleaner's today?

"is that a pair of panties?" ino asks him, and shikamaru feels a hole burn through the back of his shirt.

"um," he says.

"OH MY GOD. I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU."

"ino, wait, it's not--I mean, I--"

"I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU DIDN'T BRING THE REST OF MY UNDERWEAR OVER, TOO. I HATE YOU."

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Re: or maybe he just doesn't remember the color of her panties. ezyls_girl June 29 2010, 03:35:26 UTC
8D;

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ivy_tsuta June 28 2010, 20:25:46 UTC
Shikamaru/Hinata. when she whispers

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turtle_ai June 28 2010, 20:57:06 UTC
Her warmth pressed against his; his hand covering hers. Her breath ghosted upon his ear when she leaned close, and the two would talk silently between the trees, sit comfortably together, and their breaths would mingle together in the cold distance where every breath would turn white.

The soft of her skin, the white beauty in her eyes, the determination she held. It was all for him. It was meant for him. He was her inspiration, her very idol, the one she watched closely, noticing details, worrying.

Shikamaru could only gaze back up at the fleeting clouds, watch them float by, and wish, with a small, wistful smile, that her efforts were for him instead.

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ivy_tsuta June 28 2010, 23:04:59 UTC
Nn, I thought this was going to make me cry. I love one sided love. It kills me on the inside. Lovely, btw. Thank you! I wanna do a prompt for you, seriously.

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turtle_ai June 28 2010, 23:09:38 UTC
Thank you! :D I have a prompt up right now on the next page, so go ahead!

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ivy_tsuta June 28 2010, 20:26:15 UTC
Sakura/anyone. once forgiven.

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ezyls_girl June 28 2010, 21:55:35 UTC
;____; -wibbles-

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ivy_tsuta June 28 2010, 22:56:44 UTC
Hm, I like the drama. It is so true. Everyone does leave Sakura. Thank you for this. I like KakaSaku, though it's not one of my OTPs. I'm glad you wrote this, it's cute and mournful.

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ivy_tsuta June 28 2010, 20:28:33 UTC
Naruto/Karin. I see everything in her/his eyes

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ivy_tsuta June 28 2010, 23:06:36 UTC
Wow. Such good writing and details so tiny yet important. *sparkle*

Thank you.

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