Alphabet (Q, R)

[narya86]

Title: Alphabet (Q, R)
Parts: A | B | C | D | E | F | G | H | I | J | K | L | M | N | O | P | S | T | U | V | W | X | Y | Z
Pairing: Daniel Agger/Fernando Torres
Rating: PG, PG-13
Disclaimer: It sucks always having to come up with new ways to say how much they don't belong to me.
Summary: Okay, I never thought it would take me this long to post all

Comments

[sophie_lfc]

The first one is soooo very cute. :D I like the thought of them spending a quiet time in bed. :)
And the second one... WHOOOOOA.
I'm done and dead. :o

Great work! :)

[narya86]

I really love such quiet, serene moments too. :) And, well, the second one kind of counter-balanced that.

Thanks a lot for the comment, dear. :)

[tetila]

#1 I like the mood of it. It's so calm and peaceful it transmits exactly those feelings while reading. And I love the hand thing. I adore this.

#2 Yeah... ouch. I hurt for him here. Still so very conflicted :-/ He said it himself that he felt a bit lost and I guess in some way I feel bad for him about that, but... sigh, you know?

[narya86]

Thehe. I just remembered that your last alphabet fic was just as calm and peaceful. ♥

Yeah, I know. :( It actually doesn't hurt anymore, for me, but it's still good to see that he didn't exactly get what he wanted, even though he got what he wanted... oh, you know.

[elisa88]

The first one was so nice and pleasant. It was warm, it made me smile, it was so so beautiful.
And the second one, my god, it almost kills me.
The vibrant red and the white 5 on the back the only thing that filled his heart with… life.
seriously? I think this, and this :Relieved when he remembers that, after all, he still bleeds red. did it for me.
It is so perfectly broken. I do wish that now he has achieved his goal, he's happy.
and sometimes I get silly and nostalgic and think that maybe, just maybe now that he's got what he wanted, he'll come back

Beautiful. As usual. ♥

[narya86]

Omg, I totally had that thought too already. The 'Now he has what he left for, can't he come back...?' even though it's totally stupid and wouldn't work out well for anyone. I think. But, yeah, I know what you mean. :(

[elisa88]

I don't think it's all that crazy to think like that. I do remember reading somewhere that whilst he wasn't unhappy, he wasn't all that pleased with the role he's been playing at the club. So... Yeah, I dunno.. Just imagining him and Luis up front is mouth-watering.
But yeah, just silly dreams *sigh*

[narya86]

I know, that much was evident from his interview the day after the CL finale. And I know... I just need to stop thinking about it. >.

[narya86]

Aawww thank you. :D I don't know, I have these obsession with last sentences in stories, they kind of need to be perfect. ^^

[lady_quark]

the first one is written so beautifully soft it made my heart sigh. the second one is written so painfully beautiful that it made my heart sink.

I just love what you're able to do with them, to do to them, every single time. Thank you for writing them the ways you do, your ficlets are always something special to me.

[narya86]

Hehe yeah, they're a nice contrast in that.

Aaww thank you so much, I really really appreciate hearing something like that. :)