TKAA Coda

[nascentproselyt]

Title: Wishes and White Picket Fences - a TKAA Coda
Author: nascentproselyt

Characters: Sam, Dean, reference to Ben and Lisa (no pairing, GEN)
Wordcount: 1,2,3,4,.......er, not to many. Around 1160
Summary: I feel like Kripke & Co. cheated us out of this scene for some unknown reason. (I still think he's an evil genius)  So here's my feeble attempt to

Comments

[alena2b]

it's so cute and i love what sam says to dean. he would be a great dad. he's got a big heart.

[nascentproselyt]

Thanks hun and thanks for talking me through it. It wouldn't be up if it wasn't for you.

[magser]

Awesome!!!!!!!! Well done you!!

[nascentproselyt]

Well it's no Release Me or Rescue Me but for a first shot it's not horrible (I hope).

[lovetheguys]

A very sweet story, and so true. Dean already has proven what a wonderful father he is. I hope he has a chance to become one, and a husband, too, someday. Love, Robin

[nascentproselyt]

Thanks for taking the time to read. I just felt like the episode should have had that type of scene in it. Glad ya like it.

[eveluvden]

You captured the emotions beautifully. I really loved it. :)

[nascentproselyt]

The boys always play the scene with so many non-verbal cues that it's hard to write those in. So the fact that you think I captured the emotions is a really nice compliment. Thanks so much!

[etoile444]

Dean would be a great dad. He thinks he's all selfish and shallow, but he's all about how he cares for those he loves (which is beginning to include all of humanity). You wrote their conversation just like it might have played out if the episode had a few more minutes to work with. :)

[nascentproselyt]

"You wrote their conversation just like it might have played out if the episode had a few more minutes to work with. :)"

I take that as pretty high praise. My goal was to have it feels as close to what you would have heard in an episode as possible. Writing 'man-speak' is always an interesting challenge. Thanks so much.