STORY!post

Mar 14, 2011 18:24

Title: If Anything
Author/Artist: nastybillabong
Character(s) or Pairing(s): America, England. USUK.
Rating: T for language.
Warnings: Drabble prompt thing. Human names used. Train of thought point of view.
Summary: Arthur's stressed, and Alfred does what he does best.

Can mushroom soup pass off as a stress reliever? )

fanfiction, hetalia

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j_sasunaru_c March 15 2011, 12:04:28 UTC
I just love fanfictions in Alfred's POV. They're just so magnificent, and the angst they bring isn't overrated. This is wonderfully written, the hint of angst overshadowed by Alfred's forced cheerfulness is just beautiful.

LOL for the mushroom joke.Ü

Serious!Alfred's angst is just lovely.

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nastybillabong March 15 2011, 14:13:53 UTC
I share your sentiments. I really like it when Alfred's serious side is shown, but in the most subtle of ways. It kinda proves a point, I guess. Hehe. D'aww, I'm glad you liked this one!

Had to put the joke! x'D

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madlytae March 15 2011, 19:06:56 UTC
Oh my heart! Alfred!!! This is marvelous. Mushrooms make me think of Cowboy Bebop! XD Thank you for sharing.

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nastybillabong March 16 2011, 10:08:57 UTC
D'aw, thank you! :'D I'm glad you liked it! :'D

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kasumicc March 25 2011, 00:50:54 UTC
Aww ♥ Firstly, I liked how you handled Alfred's POV. It was also how he could perfectly realize what Arthur was feeling and yet he succeeds on acting like an oblivious dork in order to raise's Arthur's spirits. And even better, it worked xD
Nice job!

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nastybillabong March 25 2011, 02:04:35 UTC
Thank you! :'D ♥♥♥

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