[Viewfinder fic] I'm Not An Angel

Jun 03, 2012 16:16

Title: I'm Not An Angel
Fandom: Viewfinder
Pairing/Characters: Asami/Takaba
Rating: R
Warning: Maybe some OOC-ness
Disclaimer: All recognizable characters belong to Yamane Ayano.
Summary: Asami's POV. Song used, I'm Not An Angel by Halestorm. Sequel to Trying Not To Love You.

I'm Not An Angel )

fandom: viewfinder, fic: songfic, couple: asami/takaba, fic: oneshot, complete, fic

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Comments 19

nbsiren June 3 2012, 14:54:21 UTC
=^.^= MEOW! yummies!

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natasja92 June 3 2012, 15:22:22 UTC
Thank you!!

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marybala June 3 2012, 15:08:43 UTC
nice one. such a rift between the pov of takaba in the previous posting :-) ... just one comment, i felt it might be a bit too long, summarizing more would have given more impact. Anyway, Thanks for posting !

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natasja92 June 3 2012, 15:24:36 UTC
I'm glad you liked it :P Yes, I know what you mean, but somehow I couldn't get it to work that way. So I decided to leave it like this.
Thanks for reading!

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aida_yaoi05 June 3 2012, 15:40:36 UTC
O M G!!! This is very BEAUTIFUL fic. You write all emotion in one story. Love it. Hope to read more of your creation >_<

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natasja92 June 3 2012, 16:12:09 UTC
I'm glad that you liked it so much :P Thank you for reading! I don't know when something new will be up, but I'm working on a lot of stories right now ;)

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krambi003 June 3 2012, 18:17:12 UTC
Great story too though I find Aki's POV better ^_~ but you did a great job with Asami. He is such a complicated character to write and especially his thoughts and feelings. So this piece is a really nice try =^.^=

Hope to read more from you =D
Thanks for sharing.

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natasja92 June 4 2012, 14:49:51 UTC
Yes, I agree with you. Asami is a complicated person to write and to be honest I sometimes had difficulty getting my thoughts on paper (or in Word) about his feelings. I'm glad that you liked it even though it was not completely the Asami we know ;)

Thank you for reading!

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sparrow_hawk13 June 3 2012, 18:40:58 UTC
Quite the love confession! "every time you call me names I will show you just -whose- pervert or bastard I am". Love it!!!

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natasja92 June 4 2012, 14:44:24 UTC
Haha, I just had to put that in somewhere ;) I'm glad you liked it :P Thanks for reading!

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sparrow_hawk13 June 6 2012, 00:37:35 UTC
I'm becoming quite the fan!!!

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