#1 /30 April 1 2012

[natawn84]

whispering among the rubble

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[tristissima]

I absolutely adore that last stanza! (and also the image of the WMDs blowing the illusions away) And the rhythm has a wonderful thud to it, like the staccato of bombs landing!

I'm not certain about the third stanza, however It feels a little disconnected, thematically.