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Dec 22, 2010 13:25



Jake shifted the ice on his head out by the nurses’ station.

“So is she going to be okay?”

“Well, physically, probably.”

“Physically?”

“She’s a pretty girl, Jake. What do you think they did to her?”

“Oh.” Jake deflated as it registered, looking through the blinds at a sobbing Heather, buried in Beck’s arms. It still struck him as odd that ( Read more... )

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mercscilla December 22 2010, 18:58:19 UTC
Still here just very busy with Christmas. >_<

Geez, even I wanted to slap Jake. I still have to wrap my mind around what happened to Heather and I love how you write the Beck/Heather parts. :)

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shirleyann66 January 9 2011, 18:28:29 UTC
Oh, Jake.

Jake, Jake, Jake.

I love you dearly, but seriously...dude...learn to think!! *shakes head sadly*

This was very well done - while I can understand Jake's feelngs toward Beck, the fact that he was so...oblivious to Heather's state of mind made me me very grateful Gail gave him a slap. I would have done the same thing!!

*sighs*

And Beck and Heather's relationship, even in the face of this horrible event, is still wonderful. :)

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