Comments | natsuaisu: Takaki's Bro Has Got It Going On [One-shot]

natsuaisu

Takaki's Bro Has Got It Going On [One-shot]

Jan 15, 2012 01:10

Title: Takaki’s Bro Has Got It Going On
Author: NatsuAisu
Word Count: 3,589
Pairing: YabuHika, (one sided) TakaRu, mentions of DaiNoo
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Romance/Comedy
Note: If you guys are interested, I've written a sequal! (YabuxHikaruxTakaki)

Warning: Excuse any grammatical errors or spelling mistakes I make! I do not have a beta! C:

( Hikaru’s crushing on Yuya’s ‘hottie with a body’ of an older brother and makes up excuses to visit his friend’s house as much as possible. )

pg-13, takaru, dainoo, fanfics, kouta yabu, one-shot, genre: romance, hikaru yaotome, kei inoo, yuuya takaki, genre: comedy, yabuhika

Comments 18

akikou January 15 2012, 03:07:56 UTC

Hikaru is so cute here ♥
And Yabu is such a teaser XD

Nice fic, I love it ♥

Will there any sequel? :o
Okay, I'm just curious :DD

natsuaisu February 15 2012, 10:49:09 UTC

love Hika<3 and ofc Yabu would be an S here, he loves Hikaru more than us! ;P

I'm not sure actually... might write something. but i don't know what, since my brain is dead .___.

maybe yuuya gets his revenge? :P yabu rubs his relationship in his brother's face? we'll see. :)

thank you for commenting! i really appreciate it!

akikou February 15 2012, 11:15:56 UTC

I agree with you~
Yabu is definitely S and he loves Hikaru too much XD

No problem, sometimes my brain is dead too .__.

Welcome! :D

natsuaisu March 3 2012, 15:47:28 UTC

that's how he rolls~ those dominant and manipulative semes, y'know? :)

btw, your userpic is ABSOLUTE LOVE<33 :'D So beautiful!

-high fives for dead brains- lol, like every day in class? 8D

Thread 7

crazycou62 January 15 2012, 06:34:28 UTC

Thank you so much for writing Yabuhika! It's such a rare pairing to find anymore. *Sigh*

This was really good, and I hope you write some amazing Yabuhika again soon!

*Cough* Or a three some with YabuHikaTaka! *Shot* XD

Anyways, good job and write more Yabuhika! <3

natsuaisu February 15 2012, 10:53:10 UTC

I knooow~ D: FFS. Whenever I check the newest fanfics that have been posted there's never any YabuHika :((

I'll be on it~ ^_^ we'll see what happens to the trio in the future.

Thank you for commenting! :D

saffia_me January 15 2012, 07:01:41 UTC

Lol.... I know yabu is hot. Hikaru u are awesome and sorry yuya. Thx for writing

natsuaisu February 15 2012, 10:51:02 UTC

ofc Yabu is the smex. Hikaru should be lucky to have him (and vice-versa).
Aww, I felt kinda sorry for Yuuya after writing this, but I guess I'll have to try and make it up to him somehow :))

thanks for commenting! love it~~ <3

kumonoaakoi January 15 2012, 07:29:02 UTC

At first the reason I clicked this is beaches I thought it read takaryu. But guess I was wrong,
But still it's a nice fix. Good job!!

natsuaisu February 15 2012, 10:54:19 UTC

glad it was a nice suprise anyway :))

thanks you for commenting! ^w^

hotfruits February 15 2012, 00:06:04 UTC

awe, poor yuya ;A;
lol you should write a sequel where hikaru realises his true feelings and dumps yabu for yuya |D

natsuaisu February 15 2012, 14:43:54 UTC

he'll bounce back ;P
if i weren't such a hardcore YabuHika shipper i might've. or perhaps a threesome.

hotfruits February 17 2012, 06:34:46 UTC

:O

THREESOOOOOOME \o/

natsuaisu March 4 2012, 00:55:41 UTC

yo dawg, I heard you like threesomes, so wrote a threesome in this threetwo-part fanfic :B

Thread 5