DN Angel's fanfic: It Will Rain
The edited version of the fanfic.
Disclaimer: DN Angel is not mine.
Pairing: Satoshi x Risa.
Synopsis: Without her, it will rain.
Word count: 2258 words.
Inspired by Bruno Mars’ It Will Rain. Credit to stargate27 for pointing out my silly mistakes.
The small beeps from the heart monitor filled the silence. Hiwatari Satoshi stared at the rain outside- the rain ( Read more... )
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Good God! I'm so embarrassed for making such silly mistakes. Yea, it's unbeta'ed. I haven't go through it that much after I wrote it. Thanks for pointing them out to me. I'm going to reread and search if there are more mistakes. >,<
Your suggestion seems to make a perfect sense. In fact, I've been thinking to end it with one simple line, and your suggestion answered it. To make her opened her eyes after being kissed is just too lame and predicted. I love the kind of ending that makes the readers come out with their own interpretation.
I'm definitely going to credit you when I publish this. Thank you again for your help! *hugs*
(p/s: I hope you're going to get well soon!)
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