The story is getting more and more interesting!I can't wait to read the next chapter with more Hotsuma-Shusei scene. No suggestions so far, just loved it! Thank you for writing and posting it~
It's kinda tough to write this fanfic without making the characters become OOC (especially Shusei), as I'm not that familiar with the characters and storyline but I'm glad that you loved it. So far I've been focusing on Hotsuma's reactions about his partner so I'm kinda thinking that I need to focus a little bit on Tsukumo's true feelings. Of course I'll also write about Shusei and Hotsuma, but do you have any suggestion about Tsukumo-Touko?
I'll try my best to write the next chapter. Thank you again for your comment! ;D
*bow* thank you very much, sensei! I wouldn't write this if it wasn't because of your positive encouragement!
hurm...interesting suggestion there. His possessive nature towards Shusei would surely urge him to be jealous of Touko even though what Touko did is saving his partner's life. Hotsuma should be thankful to Touko instead of being jealous! LOL
Well honestly I don't really have the actual idea of what Shusei will hear but knowing about Hotsuma's whereabouts. Your make me want to write something! Any interesting suggestion???
Whom wouldn't want to get their hands on Shusei?! That's hilarious! LOL. Thank you! =D *bow* Those suggestions have been noted, and I'll consider using them when I start writing it later. I've been pretty busy lately (it might continues for the next 3 weeks) and the mood of writing never comes whenever I'm free. So updates is going to take quite some time. T^T
oh yea, Gokudera's puppy eyes are just too adorable. But I forgot where I took the icon from. =_="
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Thank you for writing and posting it~
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Thank you for your kind words!
It's kinda tough to write this fanfic without making the characters become OOC (especially Shusei), as I'm not that familiar with the characters and storyline but I'm glad that you loved it. So far I've been focusing on Hotsuma's reactions about his partner so I'm kinda thinking that I need to focus a little bit on Tsukumo's true feelings. Of course I'll also write about Shusei and Hotsuma, but do you have any suggestion about Tsukumo-Touko?
I'll try my best to write the next chapter. Thank you again for your comment! ;D
~natsuki
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(p/s: is that your cat? I love black cats. =3)
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thank you very much, sensei! I wouldn't write this if it wasn't because of your positive encouragement!
hurm...interesting suggestion there. His possessive nature towards Shusei would surely urge him to be jealous of Touko even though what Touko did is saving his partner's life. Hotsuma should be thankful to Touko instead of being jealous! LOL
Well honestly I don't really have the actual idea of what Shusei will hear but knowing about Hotsuma's whereabouts. Your make me want to write something! Any interesting suggestion???
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Thank you! =D *bow*
Those suggestions have been noted, and I'll consider using them when I start writing it later. I've been pretty busy lately (it might continues for the next 3 weeks) and the mood of writing never comes whenever I'm free. So updates is going to take quite some time. T^T
oh yea, Gokudera's puppy eyes are just too adorable. But I forgot where I took the icon from. =_="
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