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To Hang on Humming Wire (2/2)

Apr 15, 2013 13:48

Title: To Hang On Humming Wire
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Jun/Ayase Haruka, with a side dish of Sho/Fukiishi Kazue, Nino/Naka Riisa, Aiba/Kitagawa Keiko, and Ohno/Yanagihara Kanako
Word count: 14,693
Summary: AU. Jun and Haruka come from two different worlds.

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Comments 8

shinigamiami April 16 2013, 05:46:14 UTC

Hah~ I like this Jun. He's a bit Domyouji-esque, but...better. A lot better.

Btw, most of the pairings were surprising o.o Like...I've never seen Ohno's counterpart paired with him... (Only saw her in VS Arashi once I think...)

natsunonamae June 5 2013, 15:56:11 UTC

Now that you mention it, Jun here does strike me as Domyouji-esque as well.

Hope you liked being surprised, lol. :)

shinigamiami June 5 2013, 16:37:14 UTC

XD While I don't particularly like Domyouji... I like this Jun :)

Rare pairings are nice once in a while~

tormipoisid May 31 2013, 05:51:38 UTC

Wow! It's like the first (Arashi) het-fic that I really love! I adore Jun-kun here. It's kind of how I see him in real, too. If he was just rich (not an idol from Johnnys), he would probably be just like this Jun. It still feels like he is holding back so much, not letting anyone see his real self...

Anyway... Loved all the pairings. And the story and all, completely. It's nice how you used the outlines of Austen's story but made it yours. And big compliments for making it different (not just throwing other names in the book, if you get what I mean).

"Home" --- that killed me :) Perfect ending!

natsunonamae June 5 2013, 15:57:27 UTC

That's such a big, big honor, seeing as that there are a couple of het-fic authors that I really, really admire. Thank you so much. I'm touched that you liked how I wrote Jun. (He's my favorite to write. Shh.)

Again, thank you for all your kind comments! ♥

tormipoisid June 5 2013, 19:16:34 UTC

I can't think of any het-stories that I truly like.. Feel like recommending some? :)

Your welcome! I suck at commenting but I do try to let writers know what I think about the story.

natsunonamae October 12 2013, 06:15:37 UTC

Super late reply, but I've always meant to share my finds to you! Off the top of my head:

Like Vines We Intertwined - This was a relatively recent Sho/Jun/Keiko that a really liked! It's just beautiful, if a little unorthodox. It's written so well!

Layers - I'm not sure if you've seen Kagiheya but if you're a fan, this is a must read: it's Aoto/Enamoto and it's just so wonderfully written and such a treat to read. The author also has several other het fics that are a must-read!

Enjoy. ♥

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