Spectrum

[natsunonamae]

Title: Spectrum
Rating: G to PG-13
Characters/Pairings: Arashi/Arashi
Word count: 2380
Summary: What if an Arashi member loves a fellow member and they don’t return the favor? Because they love another member? And it turns out to be a circle of unrequited love?
Warnings/Notes: Just a little experiment and a masochistic writing exercise of sorts;

Comments

[xrachiebunniex]

oh my god.

Just. Oh my GOD.

why do you do this to me? ALL the time. XD

I loved that your ideas are not complicated. The prose, phrases and sentences are simple and straight to the point. Your words pierce my heart and oh.. the feels.

Unrequited love. Watching someone love someone else. OHHHHH *sniffs*

Thank you ♥

[natsunonamae]

Your comment just tickles me silly. You always do this to me!

Thank you so, so much. ♥♥♥

[harunomasu]

I personally like the story that the Yellow told (in which I believe is for the Violet). It was just so touching and I could imagine Yellow doing exactly what was written above. It's amazing. You're amazing <3

[natsunonamae]

Just, wow. Thank you. ♥

[syri_chii]

This is equally sad yet beautiful fic. I love how you put into words the feelings and emotions of them that I can feel it. -sighs-

It's a really really lovely piece. ♥

[natsunonamae]

Thank you so much for reading this. ♥

[nino1711azuki]

hello~ I just finished reading this one..
my assumption for this fic is like this.....

Blue > Green --> because of this one 'the laughter you fail so hard at containing' and this 'my lips on the map on your shoulder' just like what you guys had discussed. :)
Green > Yellow --> so obvious, we know so much, Green and Yellow spent their junior time most all the time and that continue up until now.
Yellow > Violet --> Yellow said Violet nickname.
Violet > Red --> for me this is the hardest one, but after i read it times, i concluded from this line 'the curt politeness I despise more than your temper'.
Red > Blue --> it's also obvious, i get this from this line 'kids from elementary can talk better than you'
that was it. :DD

thank you so much for writing this interesting fic ever !! and i'm so sorry for the Blue, Green, Yellow, Violet, and Red. :(
I love this. The story I like the most is Yellow, he sounds so pathetic. :|