The Day He Comes Back In His Suit, 2013 (2/2)

Oct 29, 2013 22:20

Title: The Day He Comes Back In His Suit, 2013
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Sho/Jun
Word count: 13,400
Summary: AU. Sakurai Sho is lost and broken, weary of the past and his hectic Tokyo life. He finds his way back to his hometown to run away from everything. But is he really running away…or discovering a new path?

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batrisya_85 October 30 2013, 08:13:09 UTC
i really love this fic, as everyone says.. it hits the right notch, right emotion.. thank you for the wonderful story :) more sakumoto please <3

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br_arashi October 30 2013, 21:00:12 UTC
This was so deep!
Heartbreaking and sweetly romantic at the same time!
Sho really needed somewhere to belong to... And someone to guide him to light...
Amazing story!
Thanks for sharing!

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ryan87ogawa November 20 2013, 21:42:41 UTC
wow.

wow. just wow.

I think I need to comeback to the sakumoto world... ahahaha
Got here from the sakumoto tag on tumblr, and half an hour later I got tears wetting my face as I write this.

the sakumoto dynamic is sooo great. tension, tenderness, all that attractions... adhakladfs!!

sho's mom... the way you wrote her, is so perfect. sobs. her interactions with sho was the one that brought me to tears. so beautiful. now I missed my mom (homesick much?)...

and ninooooo... the way he's always there for sho... uuu... my heart

Juntoshi art collaboration, if I had seen it I would be mesmerized, for sure... that onesided feeling ohno kept for jun is so bittersweet... ;0;

and Aiba-chan!! ahahaha... the way he shouted Nino's name and all that when they met in Jun's place... LOL

I'm so incoherrent right now.
Thank you for sharing!! ♥

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arashiforyou March 13 2015, 04:02:46 UTC
hi! i just found this and started reading, and it was beautiful!
there was an aesthetic feel to this story that grew on me as i read
it was like a sundance film. it kinda reminds me of a "5 centimeters per second" feeling.
it's quite refreshing for me since i dont normally read those kind of stories, but now i think i found a new love for it. or maybe because it's sakumoto, and there's something with the pairing that makes me match it with sadness and bittersweet-ness, which you captured wonderfully
great read! :3

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ardoration December 3 2017, 05:48:53 UTC
This is so wonderful and I almost cry in some parts. Thank you for writing such a lovely piece

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