Café N83 (2/2)

[natsunonamae]

Title: Café N83
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Nino/Sho, Nino/Arashi
Word count: 13,266
Warnings: Mention of Nino's back condition, broken-up Arashi (I know I'm so sorry)
Summary: Nino is working towards building a small café behind his house. His first four customers are the most important ones.

Part 1

Comments

[br_arashi]

At least Arashi's love prevailed in the end.
My heart nearly broke for dear Nino, but I'm glad they couldn't just let him go.
And Sho... He could actually have told him sooner, the way he felt. However, it was pretty nice seeing them finding each other in the end.

[natsunonamae]

Maybe Sho also needed time to process his own feelings? I'm glad you read through it though. :)

[coolohoh]

So sweet! I'm glad Nino returned in the end... you made me tear reading this T.T

[natsunonamae]

/hands you tissues

Thanks for reading! ♥

[pimanchi_double]

Otsukaresama deshita!
It must be hard to write broken Arashi >.<
But you did well with this fic ^^
This was bitter, yet sweet at the same time. I love it. Thanks for sharing ^^

-pz-

[natsunonamae]

Yes, I don't think I can write them this way again. Thanks for reading! ♥

[chibipinkpetals]

Thanks a lot for sharing!~

I loved every part of this.
Maybe I'm a sadist...somehow...I loved how throughout the time that they weren't Arashi anymore without Nino, they still were because all of them were still trying to keep him with them emotionally and as physically as possible. It was heartbreaking how by not speaking up, they reached a point of being so broken, so lost, mostly for Nino.

Nino's character made me want to shake him for secluding himself from them, who tried to reach him one way or another, and yet it was sad that he did it because he blamed himself over his decisions that caused a mess because he couldn't be honest.

I have so much to say, but I'll make it short and say that I loved how this fic turned out. :D

Thanks so much again. <3

[natsunonamae]

Thanks for reading. ♥

I think, even if they broke up, they would have the hardest time letting go of their dynamics. They're like each other's security blankets, kind of. Sigh.

I'm glad you liked this fic enough to comment! I'm a little ambivalent about it so reading a comment like this makes me feel better, somehow. :)

[rinalin]

So I've been totally out of the Arashi fandom for like a year, and in a bout of illness suddenly had time to get caught up. This was the first fic I've read. And I'm totally blown away. You did a amazing job writing Nino's crippling depression in a why that made me hurt right along with him. All of the characters felt so spot on. Not Nino's perception of them, but with their responses to him as well. And the flashbacks were artfully done!

Thank you for this treat!