Tantei Gakuen Q [Who has eaten the chocolate bar with nuts?!]

Nov 02, 2008 22:22


Ok, I know there will be a LOT, really A LOT of mistakes, I'm sure because no one can/want to beta-ing it, and I'm so sorry for that (I asked to knackchan08 but after I gave her the fic I didn't have any news from her). Feel free to correct me in every way you want. I know that there are a lot of mistakes but the excuse for me is that I'm italian and I'm only in my 4th year of high school, so I'm not a great translator or something like this. Please don't be mean with me! The fic is even nc17 so you can imagine the difficult for me when I was translating it XD And then I have the really bad habitude to write in a very difficult italian. So... these are my excuse.
I'm pretty sure that there will be some 'he' that I not write. I re-read it many times but I might have jumped (?) some of them XD'' After this I hope you would continue to read XD

Who has eaten the chocolate

bar with nuts?!

-very very stupid and ooc. I would say that are the characters who have used me, not quite the reverse! XD-

Renjo Kyuu probably could not be commended for the extreme trust he placed in people. He was that way, if he felt that a person spoke to him in sincerely way, he believed him blindly, he couldn't do without it.
Of course, thanks to this quality he had managed to scratch the hard rind that Amakusa Ryuu has created around himself, and somehow he had managed to instil in him confidence in people, although probably Amakusa Ryuu only trusted him and not so much on the other class Q members.
Returning to our first speech, there is one thing, only one that can make lose the idyllic confidence that Renjo Kyuu has towards others.

"..." Kyuu's hands trembled, tightening the paper now empty. The anger mounted, the cheeks started coloring faster of a deep red, eyes dwindled, the jaw was tighting.
"... WHO HAS EATEN THE CHOCOLATE BAR WITH NUT?!" he screamed, made Kazuma fall from the chair and waking up Kinta, who was sleeping on the sofa.
"What the heck are you saying?!" Kazu exclaims, sore, getting up from the floor.
"My bar of chocolate with hazelnuts!" he sobbed, waving the tinfoil wrapping paper inexorably empty. "Someone has eaten it!"
Kinta approaches them with the usual gorilla step and threw himself on Kyuu's shoulders "What you have to yell ... I was sleeping ..."
"SOMEONE HAS STOLEN MY CHOCOLATE BAR WITH NUTS!" Kyuu still sobbed shaking off the paper under Kintaro's eyes, whose mind was still in distant shores.
"What ...?" he merely said, with the voice of sleep, frowning. "But please ..." he continued taking the paper from Kyuu's hands and thrown it away.
"But ...!" Kyuu said, resuming it from the floor. "Who has eaten it?"
"Who cares ..." Kintaro sighed, stretch back on the sofa for another hour of deserved rest.
Kyuu frowned, tightening the paper. "You did it, right?!" exclaimed.
"What?" said Kintaro opening his eyes. "Don't saying nonsense!" rebuked him.
"You did it, of course!" he continued undeterred. "Gimme back my bar!"
"Listen, Kyuu, fu--..."
"Ok, enough!" Kazu intervened, closing the mouth to both "According to you how may have been Kintaro, Kyuu? He was sleeping"
Kyuu lowered his head, laying a hand on hin chin, meditating.
"You're right" whispered while Kintaro nooded convinced and returned to sleep.
In the same moment, Ryuu entered in the headquarters. He lifted his gaze and then he saw three gaze stare at him.
He frowned, unconvinced. "What?" he muttered.
"You! You ate my chocolate nut!" Kyuu exclaimed, pointing him.
"What ...?" Ryuu whispered, raising his eyebrows.
"Exactly! Only you can be the one!" Kyuu continued undeterred, with fire in mind while Kazuma nooded beside him.
"What?" But what the hell they had done while he was not there? A coca's party and now their unique stupid neurons had committed suicide seeping up to their mouth to make them vomit crap things?!
Ryuu decided that ignoring them was the best move, so he removed the bag from his shoulder and sat on the sofa, taking a small book from the headquarter's little library.
Kyuu frowned. He went up and placed before him, making his eyes cue from the book above.
"What is it?" Ryuu said, on the edge of exasperation.
"I know that you did it" whispered Kyuu, with eyes almost reduced to two slots. "You mouth is dirty of chocolate."
Ryuu opened his eyes and blushed, covering his mouth. "I-I ..." stuttering, cleaning his mouth with the back of his hand.
"I knew it, you did it!" he sobbed, getting up. "But why?"
"I haven't eaten your stupid chocolate!" Ryuu said. "I-I passed in front of a sweet shop ..." he whispered, with his face red up to the ears "And ... I saw a bar of chocolate, I was hungry... and I bought it!" he continued, with a thread of voice "I have the ticket!" cried again, showing the actual ticket.
Kyuu and Kazuma instantly analyzed it, and indeed gave reason to the young Amakusa.
"Mhh is complicated ..." whispered Kyuu, reaching a hand to the chin. "So who did it?"
Kazuma shook his head, Ryuu had his head lowered for the embarrassment and Kinta was flown back to distant shores, preferably porno ones.
"And then how you dare to accuse without evidence?! I can't believe it ..." Ryuu sighed "You are a detective of class Q, what the heck...!" he moved a hand between his black hair.
Kyuu blushed and realized that what he did was very stupid. Ryuu was right, he was a detective from the class Q, was the legitimate son of Renjo Satoru, how could he have acted so unwise and stupid?
"Ok, let's calm down. Let's search some evidence" he whispered, pulling Ryuu away from the sofa and taking him and Kazuma hooked on. "Kotae wa hitotsu!" he exclaimed.
Ryuu sighed "But why you take so much for a bar of chocolate?"
"I had bought it with my last savings!" exclaimed Kyuu, nooded convinced. Kazuma nooded with him.
Ryuu decided that was not his lucky day, because it seemed that the dementia had seized Kyuu and not just him.
Probably some strange virus circulated in the air. He had to be careful or he would have absorbed their dementia by osmosis.
"Ok, then where do we start?" Kyuu began, setting the table where he had found the empty paper of his bar.
Ryuu snorted "Maybe study the paper, the place where you found it and any fingerprints?"
Kyuu's eyes illuminated. "You're right!" exclaimed, running toward the table, while Kazuma opened his beloved laptop. He sat next to Kinta sleeping and began to key in.
Kyuu pron himself with a magnifying glass and began to scour all over the table, then he moved to the chair and bend inhuman at the floor, lifting his butt in face of Ryuu, who preferred to turn his gaze and follow him without even worthy of a look.
Kyuu climbed on the sofa style baboon in heat, observing with the magnifying the dark corner between the sofa and the library.
Ryuu, obviously too busy to seeing how beautiful were the signs of mold on the ceiling, not noticed either the sofa, nor the desperate climb of Kyuu, who, leaning dangerously, was trying to enlarge the dark and dusted small piece of floor that was there.
Ryuu tripped on Kyuu's foot and ended on his back, making him lose the balance and hurled both of them into that small, narrow, dark and dusty space, stuff that Dan didn't do the cleaning from the 50's.
The magnifying glass ended somewhere, but it wasn't certainly the greatest thought of Kyuu in that moment.
Ryuu's slender body was close to him, the chest was against his, his face in the hollow of his neck, the legs between his. Ryuu's arm strongely running his t-shirt, shoulders were narrow, eyes closed, fearing a much stronger impact.
Kyuu's heart beating so strong that he thought he almost lost his breath.
Moreover we know from the mists of time... everything has its cycle.
Even women. (it's an untranslatable joke, I think. In italian 'cycle' is the same of 'period, menstruation'.)
Kyuu now had to decide what to do, if hugging him, reassure him, snogging him, rape him, start a new life in Mexico under the name of Felipe Esperanto de Santa Cruz, open a hostel and live on memories.
"Uhn ..." Ryuu whispered, raising his head slightly and then making his nose touch Kyuu's, while the latter was staring at him with an expression that would rather fit a seal with goiter.
He opened his eyes, his face felt like burning, maybe he was blushing like a stupid, but in the darkness Kyuu probably hadn't even noticed. Because he had his eyes fixed on him and seemed that he had no intentions to take them off.
Not a word would come out. A little farther they heard only Kazuma's fingers that were tapping on the keyboard and the slow snoring of Kinta.
Kyuu felt Ryuu's hot breath on his chin, Ryuu was trying to not move, felt Kyuu's nose that touched his lightly. His hands were still close to Kyuu's orange t-shirt, his legs between those of the guy. They were badly stuck between the library and the couch, but no one dared to move a finger.
Ryuu's lips seemed so soft, and pink. So slightly half-close, that Kyuu's mind started to travel distant and far away from any thought of pure platonic love.
Yes, it was the truth: he wanted to kiss Ryuu, but he surely don't let the world know about, neverthless him.
But those lips were demanding his attention...
Ryuu finally found the strength to lower his gaze and stammer something. That Kyuu was always important for him there was no doubt, but that was ridiculous! The breath of Kyuu on his cheeks was making his brain disconnect.
Probably he was really absorbing the dementia virus by osmosis.
"Kyuu, we must leave ..." but he didn't complete the sentence, that his face turned towards him, and his lips crashed to Kyuu's.
Kyuu lay a hand on the cheek of Ryuu, while the boy was asking why was not dead, just as his lips had touched Kyuu's, was not able to breathe more.
Ryuu's squeezed Kyuu's t-shirt even more, and soon he relaxes, restarting breathing and pressing his lips -and his body- to Kyuu.
Renjo's other hand passed between Ryuu's black hair, pushing even more on his face. Ryuu felt like exploding, as feelings like excitement, desire, passion, love, he had only heard about. Now he had the impression that Kyuu was making him felt them all at once.
The hand of Kyuu starts to caressing his back, and Ryuu was pervaded by thousand chills.
Finally he left Kyuu's shirt and twisted his arms around Kyuu's neck, while the kiss was starting to become ever more passionate.
Kyuu's legs were opened and Ryuu had to settle between them. Pushed forward with the basin, still searching for Kyuu's mouth, ending inevitably to clash their hips.
"Mhh!" groaned Kyuu, breaking the kiss and feeling that his hard on was painful against his jeans. And not only his. Ryuu breathed hard, reaching the hair behind the ears, wondering why he has an hard on.
Kyuu loosen up the tie and without many compliments he throw it away. He kissed again Ryuu, starting to undo his buttons and finally reaching his trousers.
Kyuu caressed his hips and kissed his mouth's angles. He really didn't know how to do, exactly. He was doing what he felt in that moment, and what he felt was "Fuck Ryuu, now, immediatley!"
He couldn't control a though like this. He wanted Ryuu on his skin, he wanted to caress him, he wanted him to sigh, more and more, he wanted to touch him, he wanted to do it.
He took off Ryuu's shirt and he kissed Ryuu's neck. Kyuu's hands reached Ryuu's butt and the boy sighed in his ears.
Every time Ryuu's excited voice reached his ears, Kyuu hardly could control himself and his hard on who was at its limit.
Ryuu hugged Kyuu, exhausted. His legs trembled because of excitement, he couldn't stand up, Kyuu's lips were all over his body but he really wanted more.
Kyuu unfasten his trousers and pulled them down, he laid a hand on the flap of Ryuu's boxer, and lightly caresses it. Ryuu clings to him even stronger.
Kyuu lay down him and pulled down Ryuu's boxer, while Ryuu gasped on contact with the cold air.
Kyuu kissed his cheek, then he touched his butt with one hand, and came between his legs. Ryuu closed his eyes embarrassed, he was with legs open, naked and excited in front of the boy who would have ever wanted at that time.
Kyuu throw away his clothes and hugged Ryuu, and making their excitations rubbing. Ryuu to move his legs frantically every time his hard on touched Kyuu's, and the boy shook his head, taking a breath.
He couldn't held back anymore.
His hand touched Ryuu's buttocks, the boy held him stronger and he closed his eyes when Kyuu's finger began to penetrate him, slow, abul. Ryuu could not describe what he was feel in that moment.
"Ah ... mh... K-Kyuu ..." whispered, throwing his head back, moaning and hugging Kyuu even stronger, while he moving his fingers into him.
When Kyuu pulled off the fingers, Ryuu felt invaded by a total unsatisfied feeling. Kyuu kissed his lips, taking his flanks and, slowly as before, he started to penetrate Ryuu.
Ryuu's nails scratching on Kyuu's back. Kyuu was trying to enter him gently, he didn't want to hurt him. Ryuu stifle groans against his chest, felt Kyuu entering into him, ever faster. It hurt, but not only... was inexplicable.
"Kyuu... ah... Kyuu..." he moaned, twisted his hands between his black hair, while Kyuu was kissing his neck gently.

Kazuma stared in front of of his laptop's screen. Kinta opened his eyes and stood up; he saw him so freezed, he thought if maybe he went into suddenly hibernation.
He throw his arms around his neck and rubbing his cheek against his. "Nee, Kazu, what's up?" he asked, but the boy's gase was still fixed on the screen.
Kinta took an eye on the screen, who was displayed on the headquarter's closed-circuit telecameras.
Behind the sofa, against the library, there was Kyuu and Ryuu, and they weren't exactly exhausting their passion for lecterature. If anything the passion for something else.
Kazuma was shocked; Kintaro, after one moment of shocking, started laughing and caressed Kazuma's head.
"It's normal, normal!" said "And don't stare at them, little hog!"
Kazuma woke up from his dazed state, and blushed, closing his laptop. "I'm not a little hog!"
Kinta smiled and getting closer Kazuma's face. "You're curious, Kazu?~" he murmured, touching Kazuma's lips lightly. "You want to try?" Kinta slipped his hands under Kazuma's shirt and lay him down the sofa.
Kazuma blushed all over his face "No, Kinta...!" he sighed, but Kinta didn't hear him, and he throw away Kazuma's glasses and hat.
"Don't be afraid, I'll see to it ♥"

Ryuu mended his tie, with his cheeks lightly red and some lovebite on his neck.
Kazuma was redder than him, he walking in trance mode, and he blushed even more when Kinta stared/touched/something else him.
"In the end who knows where my bar goes..." Kyuu sighed, turning the paper over his hands and taking a look at Ryuu, blushing.
Megu entered the headquarter with thousands of shopping bags and with a vaporous violet and blue skirt.
"Tadaimaaa!" she exclaimed, leaning the bags over the table.
"You shopped for a nation or two?" asked Kinta, staring at the bags. Megu smiled folding her hands and didn't ansawer.
She came closer to Kyuu and she smiled at him "The bar was delicious, arigatou!"
Kyuu stared at her with the same gaze with which a lion watch an injuried gazelle, while Kazuma, Kinta and Ryuu fell from their chairs.
"You...!"
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