Renovation in progress

[naturegirlrocks]

Title: Renovation in progress for hd_cliche
Author: naturegirlrocks
Rating: R
Cliche: Draco helping Harry renovating Grimmauld place.
Words~ 4700
Notes: Sorry I'm a bit late. My wifi is not happy with me at the moment.

Comments

[susannah_wilde]

This was fun to read and there were so many parts I liked that it would be hard to list them all. I did enjoy the house-elves scheming to bring them together, how even Ron seemed to know what Malfoy was doing, and the way Malfoy redecorated Grimmauld place to suit their needs. Great job!

My favorite line was this: "You sure know how to make a boy feel wanted," Malfoy huffed. :D

[naturegirlrocks]

Thank you. It was fun writing.

[birdsofshore]

Hello dear - sorry to be the bearer of bad news, but your LJ cut failed! I thought you would like to know so you can fix it ;-)

[naturegirlrocks]

Thank you! I had to change from mobile to computer to iPad and back to computer again during posting, so everything got messed up. stupid wifi and movie apps!

[birdsofshore]

Oh, no! That sounds like a technological nightmare! I am impressed that you got it posted at all.

[nia_kantorka]

Aye, what a lovely story. They were quite adorable together. And I love the cursebreaker cliche as much as Grimmauld Place. Thanks for sharing!

[chibitoaster]

I just want to give this story a hug!

I love Draco's attitude, Harry's half-Muggle thought process, and Ron's reluctant consent. The banter was so much fun, and house elves!!

And this line:

Malfoy's smirk did things to Harry's stomach that wasn't allowed to be done in this conversation.

So many times I've tried to get that sentiment, but this one line does it perfectly! Very well done. ^_^

[roelliej]

Awww I love the way Draco remained canon and still showed his soft spot in such a believable way.

Really, really good! <3