The Four Winds, Chapter Nine

[nauticalgal]

River, Simon and Zoe remain at large; Mal makes a troubling discovery.

Comments

[fragrantwoods]

Nice build-up to the "oh, shit" moment of "02 sat 83%".

It took me a minute to try to suss out why they were struggling with the crate so much (another "oh, shit" for sliding towards the duct-taped bay doors). But at 83%, they wouldn't have even been allowed on an Earth-that-was airplane, so in space with funky psi...I could feel the discomfort and effort.

[nauticalgal]

Thanks! Glad it worked for you!