kacts list- nautisch

[nautisch]

I am so vanilla, I don't even know why I'm doing this. porn is welcome but NOT a must by any means.

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Re: snsd, seohyun/tiffany, super powers

[nautisch]

omg thank you so much ;~~~; I love all of snsd but these girls are the closest to what I'd call favorites, and them together is just too cute &hearts and I liked how you approached seohyun's powers, it was exactly what I was craving, thank you thank you &hearts

Re: snsd, seohyun/tiffany, super powers

[ladadadi]

i really like this. the description of her first memory is lovely, as is the last paragraph. and the final line is such a punch to the gut, in the best way possible. i like how you portrayed the negative side of having a power instead of the positive and how seohyun deals with it all. basically this is great :)

minho/luna, royalty/courtesan au & sex with clothes on (+ a little domesticity?) [1/2]

[ladadadi]

this isn't set in any particular culture at any particular time period, mostly because if i started researching i'd never stop, lol. i really enjoyed writing it, though, and i hope you like it just as much

minho/luna, royalty/courtesan au & sex with clothes on (+ a little domesticity?) [2/2]

[ladadadi]

she rides him slowly, the strap of her dress falling down her shoulder to expose the swell of her breast. minho sits up, one hand behind him for support and the other wrapped around her waist, and pulls her close so he can kiss along her delicate collarbone. her skin is warm and flushed under his mouth. luna's head tips forward to rest against his, and they breathe together, in and out until minho's breath hitches and his fingers clutch at her hip. she strokes his hair when he presses his face to her chest. finally, he rolls her gently onto her side and pulls out, then gets up to snuff out the extra candles around the room. when he returns, luna's laying on her stomach with her head pillowed on her arms, facing away from him. her dress lays on the floor next to the bed. the flickering glow of the candle at his bedside makes her look almost ethereal, like a nymph out of the stories his nurse had told him as a child

Re: minho/luna, royalty/courtesan au & sex with clothes on (+ a little domesticity?) [2/2]

[nautisch]

AAAAH OH MY GOD. I am really impressed that you combined three of the things I wrote down and did it so well. and I was hoping someone would write one of my het ships :")

one of the reasons I debated making a kacts list was because porn usually does nothing for me, but this was different. it was het, which in this fandom is already rare, but the scenarios you used were refreshing and stood out, if that makes sense? it held my attention and then some, which porn usually doesn't do. and I love kissing so the amount of that in the fic was wonderful fgkldj.

even though this wasn't an indepth character study, I think you still portrayed them incredibly well. luna's playful but still innocent, in a way, and minho in spite of everything is a hopeless romantic. like the flickering glow of the candle at his bedside makes her look almost ethereal, like a nymph out of the stories his nurse had told him as a child. it's so him to relate a girl to a larger-than-life thing. and the end, omg:

the last thing minho remembers before he falls

Re: minho/luna, royalty/courtesan au & sex with clothes on (+ a little domesticity?) [2/2]

[ladadadi]

haha you know me, i can't resist minho/luna. and i love courtesan aus, so it was great being able to try that out. i'm so happy you liked it, i really did have fun writing it! and that's such a great compliment omg you flatter me :)

(also askflnds this is kind of awkward but i think i met you in the kpfm tinychat the other day? i was kookjong. i wanted to say something but i didn't want to ~out you or something, so i didn't. but yeah i just thought i should say something, haha ;;)

[nautisch]

jongho would be GREAT actually :") and I don't absolutely positively need porn, so if it bothers you you don't need to write it. take your time and thank you so much!!

glandslam; jongho, jongyu!friendship (maybe?)

[onew]

Not complete, in any way. I won't be able to write the continuation until the end of Olymfics, but I will continue this

Re: glandslam; jongho, jongyu!friendship (maybe?)

[nautisch]

OMG A TENNIS AU WRITTEN BY SOMEONE WHO KNOWS HOW TENNIS WORKS

AND IT'S JONGHO

AND THEY'RE FEDERER/NADAL

OMG MY LIFE WHY ARE YOU PERFECT

in my headcanon jonghyun has always been djokovic (bias 1, meet bias 2) but this is great too because minho is the troll fucking up jonghyun's life, as always! and omg who is jinki supposed to stand for lmfao. sobs in your face :(

p.s. is sekyung mirka

Re: glandslam; jongho, jongyu!friendship (maybe?)

[onew]

p.s. is sekyung mirka
OMG I LOLED SO HARD IRL i barely know anything about mirka, though! and omg lol i didn't notice the typos! gdi i should obvs pay more attention to spelling :(((

mm well i was hoping jinki would be agassi except he's not yet retired, lol. u c what i did thar. but standing-wise onjongho should be djokovic-federer-nadal. only standing-wise.

Re: glandslam; jongho, jongyu!friendship (maybe?)

[nautisch]

mirka is a gorgeous flawless classy angel aka sekyung I didn't notice the typos so you're fine. and oic, oic, just standing-wise. creepily imagines jonghyun and nole hitting together

shinee, minho/jonghyun, superpowers part one.

[augmenti]

oh god, i'm sorry for this in advance. i haven't written shinee in a very long time, but i had to give this a shot :( The first time they try to have sex, Minho accidentally sets Jonghyun’s zipper on fire. They’re just coming home from a bar, so they’re both kind of drunk, and they trip over the shoes in the entryway and fall against the wall before they can get too far inside the dorms

Re: shinee, minho/jonghyun, superpowers part two.

[augmenti]

But though the other members seem accepting enough of Minho’s new power, Jonghyun isn’t, and he spends more and more time out of the dorm until Minho corners him one evening and doesn't let him leave, pulling him against the wall and lacing their fingers together

Re: shinee, minho/jonghyun, superpowers part two.

[nautisch]

the influx of jongho rn is making me so happy (whether it's writing or reading it, really, they're just so precious and underappreciated). although I like superhero fic in general, I LOVE it when the powers somehow suck or just aren't very useful. minho actually has a pretty awesome power and ontae are impressed, but then you use it to cockblock him and burn key's clothes which is basically perfect. and jonghyun being too manri to admit that he was scared is precious :3

thank you so much for this! :3333

Re: shinee, minho/jonghyun, superpowers part two.

[augmenti]

haha, i haven't ever written jongho before, but i think they're so cute♥ i agree, of course superpowers are awesome, but then you throw a twist into it, and that's what makes it so fun. :3 i'm glad you liked it! ;~;♥