minho/luna, royalty/courtesan au & sex with clothes on (+ a little domesticity?) [1/2]ladadadiMay 20 2011, 07:11:40 UTC
this isn't set in any particular culture at any particular time period, mostly because if i started researching i'd never stop, lol. i really enjoyed writing it, though, and i hope you like it just as much
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minho/luna, royalty/courtesan au & sex with clothes on (+ a little domesticity?) [2/2]ladadadiMay 20 2011, 07:12:22 UTC
she rides him slowly, the strap of her dress falling down her shoulder to expose the swell of her breast. minho sits up, one hand behind him for support and the other wrapped around her waist, and pulls her close so he can kiss along her delicate collarbone. her skin is warm and flushed under his mouth. luna's head tips forward to rest against his, and they breathe together, in and out until minho's breath hitches and his fingers clutch at her hip. she strokes his hair when he presses his face to her chest. finally, he rolls her gently onto her side and pulls out, then gets up to snuff out the extra candles around the room. when he returns, luna's laying on her stomach with her head pillowed on her arms, facing away from him. her dress lays on the floor next to the bed. the flickering glow of the candle at his bedside makes her look almost ethereal, like a nymph out of the stories his nurse had told him as a child
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Re: minho/luna, royalty/courtesan au & sex with clothes on (+ a little domesticity?) [2/2]nautischMay 20 2011, 17:55:56 UTC
AAAAH OH MY GOD. I am really impressed that you combined three of the things I wrote down and did it so well. and I was hoping someone would write one of my het ships :")
one of the reasons I debated making a kacts list was because porn usually does nothing for me, but this was different. it was het, which in this fandom is already rare, but the scenarios you used were refreshing and stood out, if that makes sense? it held my attention and then some, which porn usually doesn't do. and I love kissing so the amount of that in the fic was wonderful fgkldj.
even though this wasn't an indepth character study, I think you still portrayed them incredibly well. luna's playful but still innocent, in a way, and minho in spite of everything is a hopeless romantic. like the flickering glow of the candle at his bedside makes her look almost ethereal, like a nymph out of the stories his nurse had told him as a child. it's so him to relate a girl to a larger-than-life thing. and the end, omg:
the last thing minho remembers before he falls
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Re: minho/luna, royalty/courtesan au & sex with clothes on (+ a little domesticity?) [2/2]ladadadiMay 20 2011, 19:03:21 UTC
haha you know me, i can't resist minho/luna. and i love courtesan aus, so it was great being able to try that out. i'm so happy you liked it, i really did have fun writing it! and that's such a great compliment omg you flatter me :)
(also askflnds this is kind of awkward but i think i met you in the kpfm tinychat the other day? i was kookjong. i wanted to say something but i didn't want to ~out you or something, so i didn't. but yeah i just thought i should say something, haha ;;)
Re: minho/luna, royalty/courtesan au & sex with clothes on (+ a little domesticity?) [2/2]nautischMay 21 2011, 05:31:11 UTC
oh it's okay! I feel kind of bad because I feel like I was really awkward in the tinychat, and on top of that I get really anxious/nervous about being outed (I think I've had at least 10 nightmares about unanoning on meme, idk why) so I'm sorry if I seemed really weird :(
Re: minho/luna, royalty/courtesan au & sex with clothes on (+ a little domesticity?) [2/2]ladadadiMay 21 2011, 16:26:47 UTC
you weren't awkward! and nobody would notice if you were lol, we're the most awkward group of people in the world. but really everyone liked you, so don't worry about it :)
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one of the reasons I debated making a kacts list was because porn usually does nothing for me, but this was different. it was het, which in this fandom is already rare, but the scenarios you used were refreshing and stood out, if that makes sense? it held my attention and then some, which porn usually doesn't do. and I love kissing so the amount of that in the fic was wonderful fgkldj.
even though this wasn't an indepth character study, I think you still portrayed them incredibly well. luna's playful but still innocent, in a way, and minho in spite of everything is a hopeless romantic. like the flickering glow of the candle at his bedside makes her look almost ethereal, like a nymph out of the stories his nurse had told him as a child. it's so him to relate a girl to a larger-than-life thing. and the end, omg:
the last thing minho remembers before he falls ( ... )
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(also askflnds this is kind of awkward but i think i met you in the kpfm tinychat the other day? i was kookjong. i wanted to say something but i didn't want to ~out you or something, so i didn't. but yeah i just thought i should say something, haha ;;)
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