Comments | navsu: Trade Part 5

navsu

Trade Part 5

Mar 08, 2009 11:42

Olivia POV: It was Friday night and we were waiting on a warrant so I called her and got an irritated “you have 15 mins to pick it up, I’m going out”. A million thoughts jogged through my mind...out with who...out where....with WHO? I was two blocks away, jealous as all hell and had no logical reason for it. I charged into her office without ( Read more... )

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iloveliv March 8 2009, 21:11:30 UTC

cant wait for more! ;)

georgia_v_g March 27 2009, 00:45:27 UTC

haha! fuck me! that was great.

navsu March 27 2009, 01:08:00 UTC

Thanks for the comment Im not a writer but these are bugging me so alas I write. Im enjoying your Run series I hope you continue.

georgia_v_g March 27 2009, 01:28:37 UTC

oh well.. I started writing Run when I was bored.. i had no idea where to go with the whole thing... i guess i still don't know.. it's nice to know u read it... I'm not a writer either - obviously.. but I do it for fun sometimes. I just like to think that people don't expect novels.

navsu March 27 2009, 01:31:50 UTC

Its a good story let it develop and if it doesn't well we all have to make our own ending on your behalf. I just write as it comes and Im always hesitant to post. I only posted Part 6 recently after 2 weeks of no muse. It is what it is. But should you muse strike please share :)