Sex, Drugs, Punk Rock and Love!

[navy_ravenlacra]

Hey guys, i've written a couple more 'chapters' to Sex, Drugs, Punk Rock and Love - they're all under 500 words long so it isn't going to strain you if you read them... bah...

Well, here they are:

Chapter Five

Harry was shaking uncontrollably - tight spasms playing through his figure. Jerking and shuddering, his head being thrown from side to

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[mistress_gwen]

Why don't you love me anymore? You know I love to beta your stuff! Why you gotta hurt me like that? ;)

[navy_ravenlacra]

Aww! Of course I love ya! ^.^... Some wonderful person on FanFiction.net told me before I can write I need to grasp the basics of the English language - so they've sort of put me off writing, at the moment...

Mmmm... I'm trying with Punk - It has such a complex story line - most of it will need to be cut... I'd like your advise... but i don't want to ruin the story for you by telling you, haha - so maybe I'll as a friend (who doesn't like fanfiction) about it... hmm...

How are things for you by the way? I know, I've been bad - I haven't talked with you in ages! But hey - I'm back now (And i just wrote up to chapter 10...)

[mistress_gwen]

Alright, here's the thing, hon. There are only two reliable ways to improve your writing: reading and writing. If you want to write your cool, cool fics, and you're worried about your polish... Well, that's what you have me for. If you'd like, I can start explaining the changes I make, and you can learn that way. Don't let some git who probably can't write very well either prevent you from writing... ESPECIALLY if it means I don't get to work with you anymore!

[navy_ravenlacra]

Mmm... right now, I'm submissive enough to go through a lecture with Mrs. Brown - and trust me, that's torture