Lips That Taste of Tears

[nc_shy_gurl]

Inspired by these quotes:

A kiss is a lovely trick designed by nature to stop speech when words become superfluous.
Ingrid Bergman

Lips that taste of tears, they say, are the best for kissing.
Dorothy Parker

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Billy could only ever remember flashes of what transpired the first time they kissed.

The club was filled with people.  The music

Comments

[anotherbeliever]

OMG, girl! I can't even believe you said that this is nothing close to what the other authors wrote in that rec list you gave me! This is just as good, if not, better than some of them I've read. I love this. I love the fact that you portrayed every single emotion that the two of them were feeling so well in that last bit. Almost a tear-jerker. Looooooved it.

[nc_shy_gurl]

Awww! I'm glowing from the praise! I really don't think it's that fabulous, but I'm honored that you do. I worked pretty hard on it and I'm happy with it. I wanted to make sure that the emotions flowed through the fic. And my Billy muse decided that it should all be through him, lol. Thanks for the lovely comment!

[livefast_x]

wow, this was great! so descriptive, and i love that you got across their feelings with almost no dialogue. beautiful.

[nc_shy_gurl]

Ah, thanks so much! I'm pretty happy with it. :) And dialogue is a serious weakness of mine; I suck terribly at it, lol. Which is actually why this leans more to the descriptive side.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

btw, do you know who you're reading about? If you don't, I can fill you in. Or if you're interested in acquiring a new fandom, I can set up a rec list. :)

[livefast_x]

yeah, im farmiliar with the lotr actors, although usually i read about their characters, i do know who is who. i like the pairing.
;)

[nc_shy_gurl]

Good! Because one time I had a friend read something and then after she read it, she was like "That was good, but I have NO idea who those guys are." lol, so at least you have the basic idea. :)

I read about the characters too. I enjoy them both.