...But What About Me? Chapter 20

[amanuesis2]

I've added a new Chapter to my WIP!

Rating: NC-17; Pairing: Gibbs/DiNozzo | Abby/ McGee
Warnings: MPREG | Mention of child abuse | Spoilers to: Twilight, Kill Ari, Hiatus I&II for now...
Pictures included!
Beta'ed by Murgy31
WIP!
You can find it ether on the NCIS Fanfiction Archive: Chapter 20
or you can go over to my website: Chapter 20

Comments

YOU need a beta or something..

[water333]

I'm on chapters 4 or 5 and I have to ask; is english NOT your first language..

It's so bad!! Grammar and dialogue wise; it's just so unreadable..You really should go back to the beginning and REREAD the thing, then, you'll know what I mean..

Sincerely,

Re: YOU need a beta or something..

[amanuesis2]

I've reread this story many times and I don't have a problem with it, just as my Beta has no problem with it, but if this story is too bad for you to read it, then, please, don't read on...

And no, english is not my first language...