II

[ndoto]

     He'd known someone had been following him, but he also knew that initiating a confrontation in the twisty little passages of the cave would only prove troublesome.  With ears perked and flashlight at the ready, he instead pressed forward, merely hoping that his body language didn't betray the fact he knew he was being followed.  The deepest

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[nyankokimi]

Yeah, after a third read-over (this time withOUT a paintbrush in my hand ;), I appreciate what you're trying to do a lot more. The first and the second part go together much better than I initially thought.

I can't wait for more! :3