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s11235 April 28 2010, 16:54:55 UTC
This was brilliant and I don't think that the end was out of character for Gwen, she's got that fiery streak in her and it's arthur who brings it out most. Loved how Arthur gets all flustered because of her, coz so far he's only really got flustered when they are alone together, would like to see him get more flustered in public, like in this. Loved the way you wrote the characters and loved their interaction. <3

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ne_rien April 29 2010, 01:10:57 UTC
Flustered Arthur = good times in my book! And thank you for saying Gwen was in character; I was afraid everyone would balk at the idea of her teasing Arthur like that, but I guess everyone's buying frustrated!Gwen. Thanks for reading and commenting!! :D

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noodlesishere April 28 2010, 17:38:29 UTC
Go Gwen!!

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ne_rien April 29 2010, 01:03:08 UTC
I know! I love the idea of her going after who she wants--but only as long as it's Arthur!

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jjazz59 April 29 2010, 14:42:38 UTC
This is just perfect. I really enjoyed reading this story

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ne_rien April 29 2010, 18:48:48 UTC
Thank you so much!! I'm really glad you enjoyed it :)

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vaberella July 27 2010, 06:18:15 UTC
I love and adore Merlin's Guinevere, she's not wishy washy and she knows what she wants. I like how you brought that out of her in your fanfic. She has her man and she wants him and so she takes the first steps without shyness to tease. I adore it.

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ne_rien July 27 2010, 21:12:05 UTC
Gwen the Go Getter is totally my muse ♥. I love that about her. However, I will admit to writing her as indecisive at times because we all have those moments of uncertainty, even our amazing warrior queen to be.

Thanks again for reading and commenting vaberella!! =D

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alwaysadream963 August 2 2010, 01:33:21 UTC
Haha - This was so cute - I love the thought of Gwen taking more of an upper hand. Well done

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ne_rien August 2 2010, 02:57:44 UTC
Thank you! Go-getter Gwen FTW ♥

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