[FIC] FIRST

[quartered]

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Title: First
Fandom/Pairing: JAPAN: Ohkura Tadayoshi/Tabe Mikako
Rating: will choke you with

Comments

[boycottbananas]

I've always loved this pairing! I've loved them ever since Yasuko to Kenji. I need to go watch GM ~Odore Doctor~ or whatever it's called if only to see them on screen together again. Sigh~

These were really, really cute, and I can imagine their encounters like these. X3 I loved them! ♥

[quartered]

they always looked so cute to me aagh ♥ i've watched the first few episodes of GM Odore and they have screentime together at least? i'm hoping for more of these two, seriously :(

thank you so much ♥ i'm glad i'm not the only one who loves this pair :D

[lakuru_san]

*looking at your location*

Pinoy! OMG.... kinilig ako. I knew tabe and tacchon is a potential pair. But I have not proven that theory until now that I read this fic.

I dunno why but I love fics that is countdown in nature. I love how numbers show the progress. I have a favorite fic for another fandom and another otp with this kind of style and I love it to bits. The simplicity of it all made it beautiful. And yeah very much well written, I love your use of words, tacchon and tabe's characterization and the flow. I can feel their awkwardness, shyness and untapped liking for each other. The voicemail part was the best it made me imagine tacchon doing everything to extract the message. XD

I have to ask this was yasu that shorter and talkative friend? XD

gives you A+ for this! ♥ esp if my hunch was right that you have thrown yasu into the picture. :D

[quartered]

OH MY. i'm glad to have proved you the cuteness of this pair! ♥ (also yay fellow pinoy \o/)

thank you so much for the lovely comment, as well as for the A+ :D! i actually DID write it with yasu in mind, but then i realized that it could be anyone since lots of people from eito fit the description lol.

[frostbittenlove]

First time in a while that I've read something so simple and endearing, and the first time I've read something of the Ohkura/Mikako nature *___*

"i'm allergic to all beans, but i can't stop eating them."

apparently, he knew how to do it.

"even red bean paste?"

This exchange was my favourite part because agh, I think this pretty much sums up my impression of Ohkura -- someone who doesn't exactly want to be mean but so blunt irl you can't help but think he is mean and serious. (And yes, I really don't know much about Ohkura except he's in eito and the drummer and damn what a lanky, tall hot guy he is.)

♥

[quartered]

thank you for reading and commenting ♥

i've been having a craving for these two and seeing as no one has ever written anything about them i did it myself lolol. UNF oh yes, ohkura is the hot drummer askdj that's how he seems to me too. idk, it seems like the kind of person who just says what he's feeling at the moment XD

♥

[dalampasigan]

(QC! I work there! XD /shot)

hjdsakjasd OHKURAHET. What a good way to start my year. 8D I haven't seen Yasuko to Kenji, but the way you wrote them here was enough to convince me they make a good pair. Which means you wrote it well ♥

tacchon is an awkward dancer too. we don't know why, but he's always funny to look at when he tries hard.

HAHAHAHA THIS ALKSJKSJLA. This one sentence just made my day/night XDDD

[quartered]

i just realized my location is included in this entry orz small, small world i see! :D

i don't really know what compelled me to write this. yasuko to kenji was cute and adorable, don't get me wrong, but it's not like the pair had oozing chemistry or anything. i guess i just like ohkura with girls (as much as i like him with guys mmm) ♥ thank you for the kind words! i'm glad you took the time to read and comment :D

sdjbasjdk failure!ohkura is a love of mine, yes.

[kieok]

"i'm allergic to all beans, but i can't stop eating them."
lolwut

"..she was upset because he was disrespecting the other girl."
omg tabe why are you a saint ;___;

also hijrtihjfkghfgnhmfgnm this is so cute, I just want to swish it until it becomes arabic.

write more.

seriously I've had this tab open since you left me the reply on twitter with my reply in it but apparently never pushed post ;___;

[quartered]

i was getting worried. has lj banned aru? crossed my mind (because idk i see you around twitter but not on lj). how will it become arabic if you swish it D:

maybe.

lolol i bet you got distracted

[kieok]

lol .. yeah seriously D: I have such ADHD.

If I squish it the letters will bind together and form a script similar to arabic? Maybe? I was actually going to say hindi (I don't remember the alphabet they use) but then I was all "but that means no" so I couldn't.