Ah, memories. Wait a minute...

Feb 24, 2010 10:59

I posted a new poem over at my blog, stephenherron.com.
Here's a link - stop by and let me know what you think!

http://www.stephenherron.com/blog/2010/2/24/shopping-trip.html

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hellgirl5 February 25 2010, 01:16:34 UTC
Your poem is very touching. I am amazed at how little I know about childhood strife in another country. Your poem gave me a glimpse of another world. I wish I could hug the child in the poem, especially because he/she seems to take the actions of the other characters as completely ordinary. Children are amazingly resilient.

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nearside February 25 2010, 01:36:56 UTC
Yeah, I had no idea, really. So naive and innocent.

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nearside February 25 2010, 01:37:11 UTC
And thank you.

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hellgirl5 February 26 2010, 01:47:49 UTC
No, thank you. You revealed quite a large part of yourself that now (looking back) must seem very sad. I've always felt that writers, lyricists, poets often risk so much of themselves with every word, if one only knows how to SEE.

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