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archaeologist_d February 20 2011, 21:04:53 UTC
Oh, how wonderful and terrible. I loved how it was Arthur's love and guilt that destroyed Merlin forever. Just so well done.

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neathsunnyskies February 21 2011, 00:03:54 UTC
Thank you :)

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rocketgirl2 February 20 2011, 21:18:09 UTC
Oh, wow. This is beautiful and haunting and so well written. I love it.

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neathsunnyskies February 21 2011, 00:04:08 UTC
Thank you!

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mangacat201 February 20 2011, 22:03:31 UTC
BEJEEZUS. Merlin.
I knew that there was going to be a kaboom involved, but this... it felt like ice through the veins all the way up to Merlin burning at a pyre. So compelling and hopeless and hopeful and delusional that it just hurts, but you can't help but UNDERSTAND at the same time, since there was really no other way this would go with Arthur not getting what magic is and what destiny means concerning a price. *shivers*
Cat

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neathsunnyskies February 21 2011, 00:05:56 UTC
Ohh: '...ice through the veins', I love that, thank you!

And I'm thrilled thrilled thrilled that you felt the ending was a fitting one, I kept wanting it to end happily, but of course, it just couldn't.

Thanks for reading!

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laurapetri February 21 2011, 01:03:50 UTC
omg *broken heart*

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neathsunnyskies February 21 2011, 16:42:08 UTC
:( I feel like I need to apologize to everyone, haha! Thank you for reading!

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puma39 February 21 2011, 01:23:13 UTC
So depressing. Well written but so sad. Cursed to be apart forever, just too painful to contemplate. Well done.

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neathsunnyskies February 21 2011, 16:43:59 UTC
Thank you!

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