I love this. And kinda hate it at the same time. It hurt to read it. The longing and knowledge that it wasn't going to end up the way I was hoping makes my heart hurt. But it was beautiful all the same. And I'm so sorry that you're not going to get a chance to finish it. Will you at least tell me whether or not they end up together? Or is Jonny!Bot shut down for good?
"When does he get to come back to me?"
"He doesn't belong to you. He belongs, first, to the Chicago Blackhawks franchise, and second, to the United States Government."
I actually, legit started crying when I read this. It's heartbreaking. It's so cold and formal and not what they are towards each other.
I loved how you kind of jumped around portraying their relationship from their eyes and from the eyes of others around them.
And I could put all the little sentences that hold a world of meaning for me but that would take all night. So I'll just end asking ...
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"When does he get to come back to me?"
"He doesn't belong to you. He belongs, first, to the Chicago Blackhawks franchise, and second, to the United States Government."
I actually, legit started crying when I read this. It's heartbreaking. It's so cold and formal and not what they are towards each other.
I loved how you kind of jumped around portraying their relationship from their eyes and from the eyes of others around them.
And I could put all the little sentences that hold a world of meaning for me but that would take all night. So I'll just end asking ...
Why was Patrick Kane crying?
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