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babebubeboink99 November 20 2009, 19:52:39 UTC
This little fic's like Yoda ain't it? Short and so badass it makes me wanna hide under my bed and cry like a little Sith girl.

Best line of the fic?

No other woman would do; Penny was his perfect fit.

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neecoal November 20 2009, 23:24:27 UTC
WOW. I think that's the best comment anyone has ever left for me. My fic is like Yoda? I can't help but smiling ridiculously at that. :D:D:D

That's my favourite line too. I had to cast my mind back to high school science to write some of these parts and for this one I was like, 'AHA. Enzymes! Specificity!' and then out came that line. ♥

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chelsea_thomson November 21 2009, 01:39:41 UTC
Oh wow... this is absolutely stunning. Beautifully written, and very in character. Lovely.

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neecoal November 22 2009, 01:43:11 UTC
Aww, thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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your_chair November 21 2009, 06:15:05 UTC
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You are my hero.

Their kisses are an endless push and pull, her every response matching his; it’s Newton’s 3rd Law, action and reaction, though in no terms he has ever thought of before.

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neecoal November 23 2009, 12:18:02 UTC
Thanks. ♥ right back at you. :D

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montycrowley November 30 2009, 00:49:40 UTC
oh, how lovely! <3

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neecoal November 30 2009, 07:42:36 UTC
I'm glad you thought so. Thank you. ♥

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gemsile123 December 4 2009, 06:21:39 UTC
"strangely it is he who feels discovered."

That's a really beautiful line, I just needed to point that out. Excellent little piece, wonderfully and tastefully sensual. Beautiful!

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neecoal December 4 2009, 13:45:56 UTC
It's a line I actually struggled with at first, but then when I finally got it out it became one of my favourites. So I'm very glad you think it's beautiful! Thank you for such kind words. ♥

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