WOW. I think that's the best comment anyone has ever left for me. My fic is like Yoda? I can't help but smiling ridiculously at that. :D:D:D
That's my favourite line too. I had to cast my mind back to high school science to write some of these parts and for this one I was like, 'AHA. Enzymes! Specificity!' and then out came that line. ♥
Their kisses are an endless push and pull, her every response matching his; it’s Newton’s 3rd Law, action and reaction, though in no terms he has ever thought of before.
It's a line I actually struggled with at first, but then when I finally got it out it became one of my favourites. So I'm very glad you think it's beautiful! Thank you for such kind words. ♥
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Best line of the fic?
No other woman would do; Penny was his perfect fit.
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That's my favourite line too. I had to cast my mind back to high school science to write some of these parts and for this one I was like, 'AHA. Enzymes! Specificity!' and then out came that line. ♥
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You are my hero.
Their kisses are an endless push and pull, her every response matching his; it’s Newton’s 3rd Law, action and reaction, though in no terms he has ever thought of before.
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That's a really beautiful line, I just needed to point that out. Excellent little piece, wonderfully and tastefully sensual. Beautiful!
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