My sad attempt at poetry. Please dont laugh

Mar 17, 2005 20:07

You Know

You know the subtle difference
Between my happy face,
My sad face,
And my I don’t care face.

You know the reason
Why I yell,
I hit,
And I cry.

You know all about
Who I am
I was
And I will be.

You know everything
And yet you never say a word
You just gently help with a hug.
You are my inspiration.

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anonymous March 17 2005, 17:29:07 UTC
that totally rocks girl i love it

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julia514 March 17 2005, 18:59:56 UTC
Kase, a "sad attempt at poetry"? I think not. On the contrary, I would say. :-)

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needsajob13 March 18 2005, 13:24:29 UTC
LIAR but thank you it makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside

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veronicaforever March 18 2005, 14:13:21 UTC
you should feel as warm and fuzzy as Peter Jackson on a sunny day. I like zat.

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split_screen March 18 2005, 18:28:16 UTC
Agreed. (=

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Blondes... tart_oblivion March 19 2005, 15:45:57 UTC
Well, yes, I am billiant. Oh wait, not possible. I'm borderline brunette on my way to blonde. Or as my friend puts it, a pineapple. Dark on the outside and blonde on the inside. And I do write my poetry on the web. Usually no one replies to it though.
Anytime kiddo.

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