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neemochan

NOY Chapter one

Sep 11, 2009 21:07

So I'm feeling a bit lazy and I don't want to post this to Fanfiction.net right now. So I'll post it here.

Title: The Nightmare of You
Fandom: Kuroshitsuji
Pairing: SebastianxCiel
Rating: PG-13

( “What seems to be troubling you, young master?” The demon purred. A gloved finger ran down the length of the youth’s jaw. )

Comments 2

masquedelune September 12 2009, 01:26:21 UTC

I will have nightmares, I'm sure... Are you basing what's happening to Sebby and the random corpses on a certain disease or did you make it up?

Best writing I've seen from you, by the way, I can tell you really enjoyed writing it, haha. Great job.

neemochan September 13 2009, 00:32:51 UTC

I totally made up what was happening to Sebby and the corpses. I just kinda thought, "What would be bad to see?" and kept building on it, like "What would make it worse? What would make it worse than that?" etc, etc. I feel like jaws can't twist on their own in diseases... xD;

I think I set the bar too high with this first chapter...haha. I feel like all the others won't be as good. Thank you~ ^^