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[neen11]

okay it's horrid and crap and annoyingly short but i've decided to post it anyway. so you can all tell me what u think, beta it and try to help me decide if i should expose it to the wider world

Comments

[fallen_truth]

Yay!! It shines. You must continue or else I will have to take matters into my own hands. Mwahahahahahaha!!!! I like it. It is intriguing and plus it has a vampire in it. YAY!!!!! ^_^ Grrr argh!!!!

[neen11]

yay vampire. i'm not sure if luca or the man r going to be in the next chapter. it's going to be about another character. if ur very lucky i'll let u name him.

[fallen_truth]

pretty pretty please let me name him I will be very good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sadly bob will not be on the list of possibilities. :P

[neen11]

well the faster u come up with the name the sooner i might do the next chapter thingie which prob will also be really short. now i just need a name for the man.

[fallen_truth]

Ok it's a toss up between Rafe and Reece, because I can and he needs a name that starts with an R. Once again don't ask me why. It's what the voices tell me to do so there!!! :P

[tellezara]

I'm gonna beta the hell out of this for ya XD Word document will be coming your way shortly!

[tellezara]

Rightio, check your email ^^

[neen11]

ta chuck. i'll now go and see what i can do to sort it out

[neen11]

arigato. i've made a few changes. and i'm about to start drafting the next bit. but lucas only gonna be in it for a little. i still have another main character to introduce. oh and you won't find out much and the mysterious man for a while i'm afraid.

[spritchs]

Dare I read this >.

[neen11]

i don't know. do u.