Full Circle (20/23)

[neensz]

Title: Full Circle (20/23)
Author: neensz
Word Count: ~51,900 so far
Pairing: Eliot/Shawn
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Language, violence, un-beta’d
Beta: If you feel the urge, drop me a line and I’ll send you the file.  My love/hate relationship with punctuation may need addressing; I realize this.
Disclaimer: Psych and Leverage and SG:A do not belong to me

Comments

[angelus_rahl]

This new chappy = SCORE!

I love how you let Shawn's training bleed through enough that Eliot can see it.

[neensz]

\o/

I can just see Henry putting Shawn through some stupidly intense tactical training program some summer when he was like, 12; probably because Shawn made some offhand comment about how the military was way more bad-ass than the police force, or something in that vein, so Henry puts 12 year old Shawn through full-on SWAT training...

A 12 year old Shawn getting to play with a M-16 (or whatever SWAT used in the 80s/90s)?

Priceless.

[angelus_rahl]

Lol. There have already been a couple of episodes (I can't remember which exactly) that show that Shawn knows how to handle guns. And yes that is priceless ^_^

[lelann137]

yeah! I love Shawn figuring out how fast they're going, and Nate getting shot down at the end (I think he needs it sometimes). that last paragraph practically guaranteed that probably Shawn or Eliot are gonna do something vital to the mission. that's what happens in all the movies anyways--and movies are true representations of real life, right? right?! hehehe, love the chapter, thanks!

[neensz]

Right! Er. >_> Not that I would, you know, foreshadow that at all. Or anything

[theolderhunter]

I spent all day yesterday and today reading all 20 chapters cant wait for the next update

[neensz]

You make me feel all squishy inside! \o/ I hope you like the next chapter as well as what's come before 8]