Kanda/Allen prompt #13: What Mana Would Have Wanted

[neeree]

Title: What Mana Would Have Wanted
Fandom/Pairing: D. Gray Man/KandaxAllen
Characters: Kanda Yuu, Allen Walker
Prompt: #13 Grave for Table 1 in

Comments

[kitty_shiroi]

So cute and sad at the same time >.<
I also like it because they seem to be in character. I really can imagine Kanda acting like that.

[neeree]

Thank You~ I aim to get them in character. My biggest fear is making a character I love OOC.

[musician_cheyne]

I liked this a lot! It was melancholy and sweet, which I think is what you were going for. I found the characters to both be in character, which is another big bonus. ^_^ If I had one gripe, it's that I wish it were longer, but I tend to like to read novels... so don't take that harshly. Very nice work! ^_^

[neeree]

I totally agree. I actually HATE reading oneshots and tend to stick to multi chapters fics :) But this is for a prompt challenge so....ohwell~
If any of the prompts really appeal to me they might eventually grow to become a series of their own...maybe :)

[sailorlight22]

Aww, this is great! And don't worry, they are VERY IC, lol.. Also, I love that icon!

[neeree]

Thank You!

How about this icon?

[sleepingkid]

This was so beautiful xD, thamk you very much for sharing!

[neeree]

Thank You! :)

[piwi_chan]

That was a beautiful story &hearts

[neeree]

aw. thanks