White Collar Fic: Down to the Green (Western AU)

[nefhiriel]

Down to the Green

Rating: PG-13 (violence)

Summary: Peter Burke, of the Pinkerton Detective Agency, is finally in town to put a stop to a string of train robberies - with the help of Neal Caffrey, former outlaw, confidence man, and gambler extraordinaire.

“Down to the green” def. (poker term): When a player has gone all in.

Comments

[frith_in_thorns]

This is brilliant! I loved how you wrote all the characters, and the descriptions of them, and basically everything! :D Loved Neal being so competent undercover in the poker game, and then Peter rescuing him and being all concerned and worried about him, eeee! And then the last scene, with them all sitting together drinking tea, that was lovely :)

(And I'd also love to see a drawing of them in Western gear (with Elizabeth!)! Sadly I can only do stick figures :P)

[sanuye12]

I really enjoyed this. Love westerns anyway and the guys fit in beautifully. Thank you for writing!

[nefhiriel]

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. The characters were wonderfully cooperative. :D

[ebeneezerdark]

"I'd also love to see a drawing of them in Western gear (with Elizabeth!)"

YESYESYES!!

Especially Neal...

[leonie_alastair]

This is beautifully written and completely plausible. I can just imagine Neal as the elegantly dressed professional gambler.

[nefhiriel]

Thank you! I do love the mental picture of both Peter and Neal dressed in western gear. ^^

: ) !

[nynine]

What a wonderful fic! I love it!

Re: : ) !

[nefhiriel]

Thank you very much! :D

[micheleeeex]

I love this!!

[nefhiriel]

Thank you! ;D

[kanarek13]

Oh, I finally got to read it, YAY! Love it, love it, love it to bits :D It really feels like a real WC episode. Perfecto! Thank you :D

[nefhiriel]

*grin* Thank you very much! It was a fun brain-child to work on, and I'm glad you enjoyed the results. ^^