Short story about aliens

May 26, 2010 20:15

Here's a little story I doodled out on a whim. An alien invasion is called on account of weather. 1,569 words.

Eggs
by Kim McFarland
It was a dark and cloudy night. )

fanfic, writing

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marklungo May 28 2010, 00:49:59 UTC
Dear Kim:

I hope this isn't the end of the story, because I'm anxious to find out what happens next! I'd also love to see you draw the two alien kids.

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negaduck9 May 28 2010, 03:50:12 UTC
You've probably guessed what became of the one who was left behind. Which two were you interested in seeing? (Aqua girl & purple boy - birdwatchers, dark blue boy - tornado watcher.)

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marklungo May 29 2010, 21:30:41 UTC
"You've probably guessed what became of the one who was left behind."

I probably should have, but I haven't.

"Which two were you interested in seeing? (Aqua girl & purple boy - birdwatchers, dark blue boy - tornado watcher.)"

The aqua girl and the purple boy for starters, but I hope you'll get to all of them eventually.

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negaduck9 May 30 2010, 01:12:06 UTC
OK, I'll see what I can do. I'm currently working hard on yet more pics for A Refugee in Oz, but if I get totally sick of that I'll sketch them. After I figure out what they look like. (I already know what the dark blue one looks like.)

BTW, I did some thinking yesterday, and came up with a few more sketches from the kid's life. Here's the first: Some years later he runs away from... well, not really home, as he's been bounced around in foster care a lot. Seems nobody really knows what to make of him, so nobody wants to claim him for their family. Rather than face any more of that, he ties up a few spare clothes and a kazoo in a pillowcase and jumps into a cargo car in a train. He has no idea where it's bound for, but anywhere that nobody knows him is a step up, in his opinion.

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