Teukie has the hots for Wookie!!! asld;fj;alsfja;j!! I find Wookie in this rather strong. XD He's not that timid and he has a backbone.
The idea of the whole plastics, pretties, and normals is interesting.
dlsa'jfl;asjfla;jf;d!!!
Okay, I gotta say you did improve on narrati0n and all that!! So proud!! Although, I noticed some glaring grammar areas like misspelled words and a missing comma or period here and there. But you know, I'm not so great at grammar either. Terrible actually, but just wanted to give you a heads up when you add in dialogue.
;alsjfdal;jf;ajals;jfj!! Keep up the good work! I think...the more you write you'll get better. And when you read other people's works, you'll take note of different writing styles and how to approach a story, this and that. At least that's what I persuade myself when I'm reading smut.. -COUGH- YEAH. HAHAHA.
: D I got one major dislike. WHY NO KYUHAN!? DAMMIT LADY. ;_;
Re: Spot for...static_abyssFebruary 21 2011, 21:58:32 UTC
*insert long piercing scream here* I LOVED THIS!!! IT WAS ADORABLE AND JUST JDSHFJKAS SO CUTE!1! ARGH I THINK I MELTED FROM ALL THE CUTE AND JUST SDJHFLJASL LEETEUK AND WOOKIE MAKE THE MOST ADORABLE PAIRING EVER AND I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHAT TO DO WITH MYSELF THIS WAS SO GOOD. OMG OK. Let me calm down and comment properly. *skips off to do just that*
I absolutely love the whole Normals, Pretties and Plastics things. It's just such a good verse to play this out in. Just wow. I loved it. And I loved that Wook was a "normal" and okay with it. It made me love him so much. <3 And I am so glad it wasn't one of those where he's all upset. I was actually super glad that he was comfortable with who he is \0/ gooo wookie!!!!!!!!
The eunhae was so cute. Just I love Eunhae *squishes them*
Leeteuk was stunned, how could someone so beautiful be so cruel? “You think I had a choice to be a Pretty? I didn’t do anything! It was my parent’s doing. I’m seventeen and I haven’t gone through any surgery to become a Plastic and I never will. I’ll never be a
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This was interesting xD i like the plot. So cute & funny. Srsly loled at them talking on chinese in front of Teukkie xD(though it was mean t Leeteuk ._.)
It's kind of like society today... plus some enhancements hahaa
lol That's where part of the Idea came from! minus the whole government control hahaa and my teacher talked about genetic engineering and this was born :)
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Teukie has the hots for Wookie!!! asld;fj;alsfja;j!! I find Wookie in this rather strong. XD He's not that timid and he has a backbone.
The idea of the whole plastics, pretties, and normals is interesting.
dlsa'jfl;asjfla;jf;d!!!
Okay, I gotta say you did improve on narrati0n and all that!! So proud!! Although, I noticed some glaring grammar areas like misspelled words and a missing comma or period here and there. But you know, I'm not so great at grammar either. Terrible actually, but just wanted to give you a heads up when you add in dialogue.
;alsjfdal;jf;ajals;jfj!! Keep up the good work! I think...the more you write you'll get better. And when you read other people's works, you'll take note of different writing styles and how to approach a story, this and that. At least that's what I persuade myself when I'm reading smut.. -COUGH- YEAH. HAHAHA.
: D I got one major dislike. WHY NO KYUHAN!? DAMMIT LADY. ;_;
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Spot for me? \0/
I will come back to read this in the morning. =)
The pairing and summary made me very curious.
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I LOVED THIS!!! IT WAS ADORABLE AND JUST JDSHFJKAS SO CUTE!1! ARGH I THINK I MELTED FROM ALL THE CUTE AND JUST SDJHFLJASL LEETEUK AND WOOKIE MAKE THE MOST ADORABLE PAIRING EVER AND I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHAT TO DO WITH MYSELF THIS WAS SO GOOD. OMG OK. Let me calm down and comment properly. *skips off to do just that*
I absolutely love the whole Normals, Pretties and Plastics things. It's just such a good verse to play this out in. Just wow. I loved it. And I loved that Wook was a "normal" and okay with it. It made me love him so much. <3 And I am so glad it wasn't one of those where he's all upset. I was actually super glad that he was comfortable with who he is \0/ gooo wookie!!!!!!!!
The eunhae was so cute. Just I love Eunhae *squishes them*
Leeteuk was stunned, how could someone so beautiful be so cruel? “You think I had a choice to be a Pretty? I didn’t do anything! It was my parent’s doing. I’m seventeen and I haven’t gone through any surgery to become a Plastic and I never will. I’ll never be a ( ... )
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Love this!
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i like this. especially the subtle tones about plastic surgeries and the need to be perfect on the outside.
also, im thinking of the book series by Scott Westerfield called Uglies, Pretties, Specials. Heard of it? ^ ^
thanks for sharing! =)
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It's kind of like society today... plus some enhancements hahaa
lol That's where part of the Idea came from! minus the whole government control hahaa and my teacher talked about genetic engineering and this was born :)
Thanks for reading and commenting!! :)
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